"I'm Luffy! The Man Who Will Become the first Adventure King!"

The story begin barrel floating in the water.

{yeah it was luffy}

Aboard a passenger ship, two sailors spot the barrel floating in the sea.

The ship is hosting a formal dance for the rich passengers, and among them, a pretty young girl is invited to dance.

The two sailors cast out a rope to reel the barrel in.

However, when they pull it in, another sailor spots a pirate ship in the distance, a pink one - belonging to the pirate Alvida.

The pirate ship, known as the Miss Love Duck, fires its cannons, and the barrel is knocked out of the sailors' hands, sent rolling into the kitchen.

Panic ensues as the pirate ship attacks the cruise vessel, pulling up beside it and allowing the pirates to board, led by Alvida.

While pirates are attacking the ship, Koby, a young boy who is essentially a slave of Alvida's, sneaks into the kitchen and notices the barrel.

As he is rolling it away, several pirates come in and ask why he's sneaking around.

They then proclaim that they are thirsty, and just as one of the pirates is about to smash open the barrel with his fist, it bursts open and out jumps Monkey D. Luffy, shocking everybody.

The pirates try to attack him, but they are easily defeated and flee, and Koby is left intrigued by Luffy.

Luffy and Koby head to the ship's storage cellar and Luffy starts eating apples out of a crate.

While in the cellar, Luffy asks if they are on a pirate ship.

"hei,kid are we on a pirate ship?"

"no no no,we right now on the ship that pirate attacked"

Koby replies that they are not, but rather on a cruise ship being raided by pirates.

Luffy then explains how his dinghy was destroyed in a whirlpool and how he barely survived by jumping into the barrel.

{this is what i mean with plot armor version Luck}

Then, Koby explains how he ended up getting picked up by Alvida's pirates and how he has been their slave ever since.

Luffy then mentions his dream and wants to become the Adventure King, which causes Koby to be happy as he knew the adventurer are all good person.

well he has heared before being capture that if any of the adventurer doing something evil or bad...the next day all of them when missing,even marine cant find them

While this conversation is being held, Alvida's pirates tell their captain that there is a barrel monster aboard the ship and are all oblivious to the fact that Nami is robbing them blind.

{maybe nami has plot armor named unnoticed}

Alvida bursts through the ceiling of the cellar and sees Luffy, mentioning how he is not Roronoa Zoro.

Luffy then asks who the fat lady is, infuriating Alvida.

Alvida attacks, but Luffy picks up Koby and launches himself out of the cellar and onto the deck.

He is attacked by Alvida's pirates his devil fruit ability

Gomu Gomu no Rocket!!!

shouted luffy with a smile

then few Alvida pirate were trowed from the ship

When everyone is shocked by this, Luffy explained

"I'm Luffy! The Man Who Will Become the first Adventure King!"

this sentance make alvida pirate shocked as their knew every adventurer from adventure guild are strong

and the kid infront of them is one of those strong force

"i am a rubber man who ate the Gomu Gomu no Mi"

said luffy with huge grin

then luffy said "i wants to find One Piece and is currently looking for a crew, maybe ten people are good enough"

meanwhile

Alvida asks Koby who the most beautiful woman in the world is.

Alvida, who had trained Koby to stay by her side, is shocked when Koby, inspired by Luffy, stands up for himself and yelled at her

"you are smelly, fat, old hag!!" shouted Koby as he crying

Alvida becomes livid and attacks. Her mace strikes Luffy right on the head, but he stays standing.

Luffy proclaims that a normal attack like that won't work on a rubber man, then winds back and uses his ability again

Gomu Gomu no Pistol!!!

luffy attack to send Alvida flying, defeating her with one hit.

Luffy orders Alvida's remaining pirates to get a boat ready for him and Koby, and they jump into the boat and sail away, briefly seeing Nami in her boat as they head off.

but luffy dont see that his adventure card when shine a little

Sailing out into the great blue sea, Luffy asks about the pirate hunter Koby mentioned.

Koby says that he was captured by the Marines, and Luffy announces his intention of asking him to join his crew.

This causes Koby fell happy but then he remeber that his dream to became marine.

Luffy makes up his mind and said

"ronoroa zora will be swordman in my adventurer team"

While they are speaking,

luffy take a look at his adventure card as he afraid it went missing but gladly he still had it in his strawahead

"what!?!?" when luffy saw the card he was shocked and his scream make Koby shocked too

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Monkey D Luffy

Strawhead Adventure Team

Personal Rank:Bronze III(135/10000)

#defeat alvida:70

#defeat alvida pirate X13:65

Team Rank:Bronze III(0/100000)

point:100

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"shi shi shi,my card has changed" said luffy with huge grin on his face

"oh?adventure card?,i heard those card can change it own information,but i dont which DF can create something like that" said Koby

"who care?,what is important is the number is rising" said luffy as their small boat moving toward the marine location where zoro were sent after being captured

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