From Fairy tail to Multiverse(dropped)

THIS IS MY OWN NOVEL,OFCOURSE I WILL VOTE ALL 5 STAR!!......................................................................................

Sudah 12 hari tapi yang baca sedikit. Mungkin karena susah dicari dan penempatannya tidak sesuai. Tapi tidak masalah buat aku, karena saya bisa menemukannya. Tolong pindahkan ke fanfiction supaya banyak yang bisa baca. SARAN AJA.

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Hemm you write to fast bro/sis I dont even finish reading all other novel...but you keep updating...sigh It but well it dony hatd to chose as your novel still dont up to my standard as my other fav novel I am voldemort Admin of girl chat group Novel like that

Bad grammar, no explanations of anything and the story just jumps around. The MC randomly gains creation magic even though he didn't wish for it. MC does random things without explanation, and within a couple chapters he suddenly had a strong guild with nothing to show for it, there is no story behind it.

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Overall still okay,but if you can reedit the novel,i hope you edit all chapter back...all because there are to many wrong word... also i hope you dont update to much in one day,it hard to read it then after that other chapter updated... it quite trableamsome okay?

Sorry to say, this could be a good novel, but as you stated in the first chapter that this is your first fanfic, so it's understandable. But the grammar and wording is atrocious. I recommend that you use Gramarly or even some plugin like Outwrite to help you with the grammar. And the story kind of feels being done in a monologue. Doesn't feel like a novel at all. Good luck and hope your writing gets better.

I wont give it all 5 stars because of the grammar Miht wanna work on that but the book was very fun to Read and also aits quite easy to read.

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