Cross is the last of his kind, an extinct species wiped out long ago. Blessed with a strange power, he shall make a name for himself and make everybody remember the Blood Elves once more!
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(BTW I suck at writing these! Just read it if you're interested!)
why's fanfics that I don't want to read always have a tons of chapters, while a fanfics that i really like always dropped?
Looking at the title, I didn't even think this was a HP fanfiction. But I was quickly surprised and found it to be a good read to the point where I just couldn't stop. While I usually wouldn't give 5 stars for a fanfiction due to having a resource to write off of, I decided to say 'F*** it.' and went with it. Do know that the story follows the typical route, however its mainly seen as a side thing as the MC usually doesn't get involved. The main story tends to revolve around the hidden dealings going on around the school and mysteries concerning his race. One of my fav. characters is Carl. Curious about Carl? Then check out this fan-fiction. Overall, I recommend this story and greatly looking forward to what the author has in store for us.
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let's give this book it's first review. Amazing concept, well written and overall a good fan-fic. Now all I need is more updates and chapters. Hope that this novel doesn't get dropped. That's all.
This story is pretty good but i will not give it 5 stars for a reason that mc's personality is not really stable and so are his relation with others. Like you don't know when he will explode. Other thing is his relationship with others some time he treat them as his friends and the very next chapter he would say he don't care if they live or die. The worst is part with hermione some times he says that she is like her sister and other times he would just leave her to fend off herself saying he doesn't care about anyone other than his family. Plus despite the harem tag there is no harem insight for long. Hermione is shown to love him deeply but he constantly asks her to move on or you will die alone. I don't know why there is a harem tag here may be author is thinking of ending the story with a harem idk but really the tag feels misleading i mean there is not even a little romantic development between him and any other women except luna who is the main wife.
Just reread this its not that good, grammar is ok but the story feels so rushed and the mc is very stupid or atleast chooses to do stupid stuff the entire hp arc feels like an intRoductury chapter which i guess it is however its not a good one, throughout the entire fic i wanted it to end it was a complete waste of time on my part
This novel is great if you only count the first 70 chapters because after that the only thing it turns into is the mc following scum che around in the atg world watching him pick up women while the mc follows him like a lost puppy so the story is straight garbage after 70 chapters mc is like a hormonal Middle Aged woman who just has mental out bursts for no reason
It has almost nothing to do with HP and is just a cultivation novel thats basicly everything it is. 💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤
I love this story, it's different from other HP fanfics and it has a mystery element to it. (Im on chapter 21 so far and can say that this is one of the best HP fanfics on this app)
meh
HP arc is great but with the start of the ATG arc it slowly but steadily goes from 5 stars to by ch 115 all the way down to 2.5 stars. it's still worth a read for the HP arc.
it was good for around 40 chapter main character was some one you could understand but at 42 he change to a edge lord tat kills people left and you cant even tolerant reading one more line. DROPPED
I dont normally write reviews and I doubt the author will see this but. I felt I had to make a review because this was by far the best book I read your a great author with unlimited potential keep up the good work but don't over work yourself your health comes first thank you for writing this book ill definitely be reading any others that come out or that has come out thank you for your time
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Everything was Good(I was interested in Harry Potter arc because its creativity thought) BUT it became Downhill because mc personality at new world(or do you want to make a plot where he regret his action later on because of his arrogance? I smell some kind of sacrifice... Meh)... And how the f they(MC with those ATG people) became so close after a few chapter(maybe its only a 2/3 days I forget), they seem like a long lost family. They interaction like a sh*t(Is that comedy part? I don't think so). Waiting for redemption... It has potential thought..