We created demon Jaegers to bring an end to the merciless slaughter by the demon king Lucifer 2000 years ago.
Now he is back, and the world once again calls for heroes to step forth and slay the fallen angel once and for all!
Unfortunately for them, they got quite the opposite.
Zedrel has lost all his memories and has been tortured and tormented for as long as he can remember. He only seeks revenge to fall upon those responsible for his suffering. But as an old Demon Jaeger discovers the innate ability of his old clan in Zedrel, his interest grows.
Will the world-class mentor ever get through to the broken Main Character? Or will he end up getting murdered by his own student?
That is for you to discover in the wonderful world of Demons and men.
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Hello!
Author here.
I sat on an icy afternoon searching and searching for any novels resembling dark fantasy, but I found none. I wanted a determined MC with a twisted and unique mind to uncover the secrets of the world while fighting his inner demons.
That is why I created an amazing novel you must read!
Because of lockdown, I will post more chapters than normal, and I at max can deliver one per day if I am to keep the same quality and length.
So basically I enjoyed the story so far, the air of Mystery revolving around the ML is something worth looking forward to. Mr Gibbs is a character I'm not sure if I should be angry at or I should give a second chance and wait for his backstory (if he had except the one he keeps narrating to the ML 😅) There were some questionable actions though in the first two chapters of the story 🤔 📍How would a parasite eat through(even though not all) your nerve in a person's brain or the brain in whole and still be alive? 📍His hand got smashed by a Warhammer (it reminds me of AOT 😅sorry about the reference) and yet he still struggles to get free. ~Superhuman strength I guess. As your first story, I'd say you're doing a great job as I could imagine what experiment 69 was feeling. Keep up doing what you do best and I see this being recommended in the future
The story is extremely intriguing, with the author giving the right mystery to the main character. Well written and engaging. I hope you continue with more chapters.
The perspective of the narration as first person is outstanding! It is filled with with complete mystery (I got heartbroken for mc on the first chapter). I can't wait for more chapters to come.
began reading this at five chapters long, and I love them. now I can't wait for more, and will look forward to the development of the ML. Great flow and all
I love everything about this story it is a good main character and i like how it plays out and i have enjoyed it so far and i am gonna be reading it to the end
It's AWESOME.....And DARK at the same time. I don't know why but it is indeed a story worth reading. I just hope it gets updated soon since the author is doing a great job making the story intriguing.[img=recommend]
The story line is interesting,it makes one want to glue themselves in the book. The plot is very creative,keep up the good work. can't wait for more.
The story flow is good. I can imagine MC conditions vividly in my mind. Sentence correction is needed. Else everything is good. The story has 1000% potential. Hope to see more chapters in upcoming days.
There is little actual world building as of chapter one, however there is splendid character designs and the desperation of the MC is clearly felt. There is marvelous foreshadowing and the story flows smoothly, however the little bumps that happen are primarily due to grammar or verb tense issues. Overall, it is a wonderful novel, and I would ABSOLUTELY recommend this. Splendid work
......................................................................................... THe MC is a Mystery.................. Interesting Needs improvement in the updates and Sentence construction CAn do better.
Alright so after having read the 2 chapters which are currently out, I have become quite intrigued. The author has done a great job at introducing new characters in a slow and not overwhelming way, yet he keeps mysteries hidden about the MC. overall you should definitely read this. It is worth it! :-}
this way too early to review as there aren't much details about the mc or the world but poor mc can't wait for his evil awakening kekeke and the war setting is awesome will be waiting for more updates
Oh, I'm kinda sad thats is only have 2 chapters. Upadte more! But the novel had a good start. I feel sad also for MC, he is in so much pain. Fighting! ˚‧º·( 。ᗒ ‸ ◕✿)
This is quite early to post this since it has been only 2 chapters posted at the time of this review. However it did pique my curiosity so I will continue reading it for now.
The first chapter is very promising and it has a lot of potential to kick off. The language used is good and can be concise on details and you are good at describing the main character struggles happening. The main problem is the grammar and punctuation written but it'll be easy to improve at. Good luck!