So The Story is Good but it has more room to improve so keep grinding but i know your new in this career.. just keep adding chapters daily you will get it, and This is gonna become an interesting Story
4 years ago
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Xeoz
I have no clue what's going on. The novel got so many instability and the phasing was too fast. No foothold. No structure. No proper character introduction. No build up. No word building.
So The Story is Good but it has more room to improve so keep grinding but i know your new in this career.. just keep adding chapters daily you will get it, and This is gonna become an interesting Story
I have no clue what's going on. The novel got so many instability and the phasing was too fast. No foothold. No structure. No proper character introduction. No build up. No word building.