I wrote this thing to practice my English. Hopefully it's readable.
So basically it's the story of this guy who completes a survey, gets killed by thighs, and gets OP.
Theoretically, I planned on this being a Multiverse fanfiction because I consider those fun, but I'm still in the first world.
I own absolutely nothing except my OC, just barely.
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The story is interesting, but in my opinion in the next worlds it would be more interesting for him to limit himself with his powers, (himself limiting himself) not to be too boring and too easy, after all he is already very OP, in this case you would have more worlds to select, after all he will try to limit himself to the power of the chosen world.
From what I’ve read, all I can say about this book is that the grammer is on point, spectacular world building, I can ‘personally’ visualize the MC from the authors descriptions and this final one made my fucking day.. No harem or NTR!! But, I know, I know there’s always a catch and these ‘catches’ are the rushed ending at the time of Volume 1, for the Harry Potter world, the slightly ****ed up romance and in my opinion going with Danmachi instead of Star Wars or some other non-anime type world.
it was a great novel until you had his mom join his harem even if he dosent see her as his mom its still kinda gross just saying so i dropped but everything else was good
to the Dear Author, i am a reader od tour awesome book and i like it very much, but lately i am seeing that the number of chapters have reduced. So as an supporter of y0ur awesome work i would like to know how we can help PoweStones? Reviews? Comments? ideas? we are here for you so don't give up🤗🤗 otherwise i am gonna "akkio" you and beat your ass
It's a shitty harem insest novel it's not even tagged om disappointed because the story is good but chapter 35 it's beginning of the harem insest. It's flooded of shit so disappointing the story was good tho . . . I wanted put 0 but the writing and story is real good but harem plus insest and its not even said... Fucking shit.. . I'm really mad web novel is made of 98% harem shit... Fuck
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This is pretty good I recommend this to anyone who haven't read it yet----------------------------------------------------------------------
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I loved this story till 20chapters thats great ande story is nice. I also liked MC way of doing things and story development... But after around 20chapter it start to becoming slight boring.....
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