A group that wants to return magic into the world.

Kasarus

ACTION

ADVENTURE

I don't really know what to say haha... Okay so first of all I'm actually kind of annoyed by this novel because it feels like wasted potential, the grammar is good  and its done in an interesting way. The story itself is also good. However... And this is why I said it feels like wasted potential. There are quite a couple of issues. Namely the pacing... The chapters are nothing. I got through this novel in under ten minuets, and than went back and re read it. Now granted it only has 7 chapters but that's just it... It's so short. And yet it somehow feels long. Each chapter needs to be way longer. Normally a chapter on here is 1500-2000 words long. I have a hard time believing some of these are even 1000. My other issues is that the world feels so massive. And so small still. It mentions cool things, and cool and interesting stuff happens. Than it just doesn't tell us why. It jumps head first into the story and doesn't slow down not explaining the world or anything around it. We know very little about the characters or even the actual state of the world. Little things are dropped like some of the magic, and things about a war. It's like you're just expected to know how this world work. And that's what bugs me because just from the seven chapters I can tell this is an interesting story with thought put into it. The work just wasn't put in. I actually feel like all seven chapters should have just be a single chapter. The timeline jumps around a lot and only gives answers without any questions at all. It's as if the novel doesn't know what it wants to be? And that's kind of a shame because as I said it's actually good.

But it's also weird. A novel like this just doesn't fit on webnovel lol. I'd recommend a better synopsis as it's not eye catching at all and a cover art as well. And who knows maybe this Novel will finally start making sense and tell a good story.