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the worldbuilding of this world is steady; there's a lot to take in, but the concept is easily understandable, making the experience all the more richer. the author's writing is also exceptional, with vivid descriptions that made me picture the scene effortlessly. some things that could be polished on would be punctuation, but other than that this book is really well-written. keep it up, author!

i get immediately hooked on this book. it has a great idea and well created character. i laughed when the MC turned from a boy into a girl. Can't wait what else will be unfold in the future. good job, Author!

The story plot and character building has been done nicely and the author has given a detailed account of the story making it easier to understand. Love the work. Keep it up.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

OK! So the first thing that got me hooked it the world building and your descriptive writing!! That is really awesome and have an interesting concept! The story pace is also really good to enjoy and the character descriptions are also great, and lovable. It is such a good ride, author!! Let me wait for more chapters!

Excellent grammar, fun plot and vivid descriptions. I think this is a very well written novel! Great job author! Keep writing and keep posting!!

Like it a lot! The writing is interesting and amazing. The plot is well described. Keep going, author and more importantly, don't drop the work.

The charecter development and the world background is better than most of the novels out there. The plot is more engaging and immersive. I really like the MC and his thought process. More chapters please!!!

Definitely an easy read. There's really good characterization and description of appearances. I like that it's not trying to hold your hand or over-explain it's concepts. Also, there's some great seeding of concepts and I'm only in the second chapter. I'm also a big fan of women with intense bloodlust and Eleanor seems promising on that front.

Nice work! You have a great thought! I enjoyed reading your book! Synopsis is interesting and plot is very well defined. Characters are also described well. Overall, great story! Since I love reincarnation genre, I loved it! Keep it up!

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE This novel was inspiring me to write! So far so good! I am sure this will pave well in the future as the author is talented. The story was eye-catching and hooking! Kudos! The author is better writer than me so I can't say much. 😉 ADVICE Some sentences are not starting with capital letters. I guess you should check it out.