Naruto: Beyond the Byakugan
In the heart of the Hyuuga clan, being born without the Byakugan isn’t just rare — it’s nearly unforgivable.
Haruki Hyuuga is different. Indigo hair. Deep blue eyes. No inherited gaze. To the clan, he’s a flaw in the bloodline. To the whispers, he doesn’t belong.
He should have been overlooked — dismissed, forgotten.
But something inside him stirs.
It starts with a flicker — chakra too steady for a child, too sharp to be chance. While Neji is hailed as the prodigy, no one notices Haruki’s quiet awakening.
His power isn’t inherited. It’s evolving.
Something ancient coils beneath his skin — not a dōjutsu, but a mutation. It doesn’t shine. It bends. It listens.
In a clan built on bloodlines and cages, Haruki’s path is unmarked by fate — and that may be what makes it dangerous.
He doesn’t need the Byakugan.
He has something else.
And it’s only just begun to wake.
And in a place like Konoha, different always draws attention.
**** This is the rewrite of my previous one ****
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DISCLAIMER:
[I don't own Naruto and One piece as they are created by Kishimoto and oda respectively]
[This is a rewrite]
[Cover is also not mine]
Well your novel is good so I am giving yo 5 stars But I think you should improve your english I know its not your 1st language but at least you should try There is too much drama , I know its important for character to grow but in starting chapters its too much. you should try to do it a little less All in all I like your novel and keep up the good work
I would recommend this as a fic, Ive read many others and nothing can compare, The writting Quality is something that eveRy book should strive for.
good idea for naruto fanfic or should i say hyuuga fanfic? interesting! although ssome slight mispellings and punctuations could be corrected by using grammarly *not advertising ok*, It doesnt cause readers to be distracted. Overall good, i hope author can create original hyuuga justu. thank you!
Great start, looks good but lets how it goes for long run, and cover looks like sinbad?? so will he have his abilities, if yes then thats gonna be dope...
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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The book is good and has potential . Keep on writing .It will be an amazing book after that 😀😇💯😊👝💯🥳💯👝😀😘🤩🙂💕🤓😘😭🤩😤👌😂😭😋👊💯😊😉🔰😝😌🤑😎🤑🤑🤑👊😋🔰❤🥳😊👝😀🔰
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Need more chapters faster i wanna know what comes next. This is a really interesting story to read. Definitely puts a spin with the Hyuga’s.
This is a great fanfic.The character is an OC and also brother of Neji. The background is also not at all bad. And the writing quality of this story undoubtedly topnotch. The story has great potential and waiting for more. Thank you for writing such a great story.
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You had my support when I saw no harem. This story us amazing. Took literally a whole hour to fund no harem naruto FF.........................
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others