Born into the Hyūga clan without the Byakugan, Haruki should’ve lived in the shadows — a forgotten branch on a sacred tree.
Instead, his chakra began to change.
Not in the eyes… but everywhere else.
While Neji is called a genius and the clan clings to bloodline pride, Haruki's power blooms in silence — sharp, strange, and undeniably different. It bends space. It senses emotion. It shouldn’t exist. And no one knows what it really is.
But the clan can feel it. The elders whisper. The stares grow colder.
And Haruki?
He’s done being silent.
Set in the heart of the Hyūga compound, this is a story about bloodlines, rebellion, and the quiet rage of a child born wrong — or maybe just born different.
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Disclaimer:
I don’t own Naruto or One Piece — those masterpieces belong to Kishimoto and Oda respectively.
This is a rewrite.
Cover art also not mine — full credit to the original artist.
Great start, looks good but lets how it goes for long run, and cover looks like sinbad?? so will he have his abilities, if yes then thats gonna be dope...
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I would recommend this as a fic, Ive read many others and nothing can compare, The writting Quality is something that eveRy book should strive for.
Well your novel is good so I am giving yo 5 stars But I think you should improve your english I know its not your 1st language but at least you should try There is too much drama , I know its important for character to grow but in starting chapters its too much. you should try to do it a little less All in all I like your novel and keep up the good work
good idea for naruto fanfic or should i say hyuuga fanfic? interesting! although ssome slight mispellings and punctuations could be corrected by using grammarly *not advertising ok*, It doesnt cause readers to be distracted. Overall good, i hope author can create original hyuuga justu. thank you!
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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The book is good and has potential . Keep on writing .It will be an amazing book after that 😀😇💯😊👝💯🥳💯👝😀😘🤩🙂💕🤓😘😭🤩😤👌😂😭😋👊💯😊😉🔰😝😌🤑😎🤑🤑🤑👊😋🔰❤🥳😊👝😀🔰
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Need more chapters faster i wanna know what comes next. This is a really interesting story to read. Definitely puts a spin with the Hyuga’s.
This is a great fanfic.The character is an OC and also brother of Neji. The background is also not at all bad. And the writing quality of this story undoubtedly topnotch. The story has great potential and waiting for more. Thank you for writing such a great story.
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You had my support when I saw no harem. This story us amazing. Took literally a whole hour to fund no harem naruto FF.........................
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others