The MC is an angry and bitter 'hero' that has a vendetta against a powerful being that tricked and deceived him. He gets a gamer-ish power from another powerful being that will help him grow strong, but not overly quickly since it lacks some gamer functions.
I don't plan to rush the story too much, but knowing myself, I just jinxed that. He will be visiting worlds that most of you are familiar with, but I might throw a curveball in the future.
My grammar is... okay, I guess. I'm not a native speaker, so I'll make mistakes. If you spot them and you aren't too lazy, leave a comment for me to fix them.
Chapter length is about 2500 words.
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good novel so far overall. good grammer and spelling. characters a relatable so far. very enjoyable to read so far and long chapters. you wont regret reading this.
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I loved this novel!!! Good job author-san, i can barely wait for the next chapter!!! ................................................................
Authors giving their own stories a review seems like a tradition here, so I might as well get in line. The MC is an angry and bitter 'hero' that has a vendetta against a powerful being that tricked and deceived him. He gets a gamer-ish power from another powerful being that will help him grow strong, but not overly quickly since it lacks some gamer functions. I don't plan to rush the story too much, but knowing myself, I just jinxed that. He will be visiting worlds that most of you are familiar with, but I might throw a curveball in the future. My grammar is... okay, I guess. I'm not a native speaker, so I'll make mistakes. If you spot them and you aren't too lazy, leave a comment for me to fix them.
This is awesome!!! I found a hidden Gem!!! Please update more!!!!!!!! Nen and magic is freakin awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update more please!!!
very good writing quality, no nonsense type mc(so far atleast), not much drama, stable updates , first world - harry potter... what more do you need to read this story?? seriously just try it out...
well i like ideal of the story alot.we have not really got meat this tale yet .so holding my real opinion this.hp is story that can twisted a million ways.it why it's one of my favorite fanfics to read. hopefully you don't drop it
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Slow in the beginning but gets good latter still too few chapters to make it a grate fanfiction
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