Sate My Soul

Fast paced with plot twist within. a lot of dialogue between characters that draws one to them. Look forward to reading more :) keep it up demo~

At first I felt like things were too fast-paced, but I surprisingly found it pretty well-done after progressing through the story. I look forward to seeing what this novel becomes in the future.

Woah, a good story line.. Only 3 chaps but still its so good.. everything is well written and well presented... good luck to author... keep it up

Good read Mage and Mage Story about mages are numerous but they don't seem too boring. But this one is a bit different as the Mc is Mage as well as The son of a Demon lord. He could have been the heir but he chooses to travel the world.

The story is great and well written. Although, the story development and character development is really good, try being more descriptive. [img=recommend]

I'd say this story is interesting, I thought it would be something like realism but surprisingly it's twined with fantasy, which I like. Keep it up Author 😊😊😊 P.S. We have characters with the same name XD 'Karina' coincidence?

I liked the writing style of this story and the use of spells. I thought the story was read to read and flowed well. Looks like an interesting plot. Looking forward to reading more :)

Mmm, a great story, although I hate the way what happens to the girls that u can read from the first chap (I'm a guy, but I'm more favor to girls [Im straight], I hate how they treat girls) Ahem... by the way, you need to be ready to read the book, at least you're (emotions) are not like mine (I'm always depressed when I'm thinking too much, and I can feel the emotions for real). Am... the story is good as it makes me think how the (girls) can escape from their situation. Looking forward to it, Author!

I really like the plot! The characters are amazing as well! I like the plot since it isn't focused on romantic stuff only! I hope you update the story soon!!

The story has a lot of potential from what i can see, even when it only has two chapters. The Author has a good writing style and great sense of diolouge, when the characters speak.

Interesting first chap, I like it so far, characters also are not annoying! Keep up the good work! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I love this, I could easily get into this. It’s very descriptive and capturing! I defiantly reccomend this to anyone I defiantly will be keeping updates with this book!

The story has potential if develop properly. Writing quality of author can be concider as good. But I must say the story isin little fast phase. Author can be more discrptive in some parts to make it more realistic. character seems strong. but need more details to get more clear picture of their actions. World background is nice. all and all this is good story given this is a first story by author. There r chance of improvement but author can get his grip on it in time. good work 👍 keep it up

It's a good book with a clear image and a great storyline. A creative writing style and hopefully the next chapters will be as good. Good work