Technomancer of Marvel

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really nice novels, it started at a really nice pace, he has really good powers, which might not add anything to his arsenal for immediate combat, but well the current year is 2002 so no need for that too, but the potential his power has is tremendous, he also uses his brain very nicely, all in all, its a really good novel, and has really good potential.

Posting a small chunk of a chapter and then saying you can continue reading on his patreon(ch.23). The story hasn't even developed enough to justify a patreon even

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Evaluation: Below Average WQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5 WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

Calidad de escritura (3/5), actualización de estabilidad (1/5), desarrollo de historia (2/5), diseño de personajes (2/5) Fondo de mundo (2/5)

Author is obsessed with putting Dcu elements and characters in MCU. It’s honestly a bit of a waste. The powers have potential, and the MC uses them like someone who just got his powers. I like that he isn’t instantly OP.

MINOR SPOILERS ABOUT POWERS/PLOT! (Didn't hide review due to spoilers, because the spoiler is very minor in my opinion) I cannot claim to be a professional or even above avg. on reviewing books/novels. I consistently try to find good novels that have technology as the super power. What I've typically seen is that the MC seems to skip a lot of crucial steps in progression to what I assume is to just speed up the plot. I've enjoyed reading your characters thought process/actions he takes to build his company so far and thinking further than just making the best tech by starting from the resources themselves and not limiting himself to what we can recycle as of now. The way he uses his abilities, the length of time his training takes to get to an "Intermediate/Advanced" lvl and even him branching out into different fields to take advantage of his mind instead of just relying on his tech makes your MC seem more realistic (If you can call a super powered individual in a fictional universe realistic). Anyway, judging from the upload times and the reminder of this being a new thing for you in the description I know that writing isn't a top priority for you, but I would absolutely love to watch you find a genuine passion/obsession for writing this story and make this at least a decently long (300+ chapters) story.

this is a great story so far, I love where this is going. the writting is good love how you intigrated Bruce Wayne's character into the story. although, how are you going to do his background as you know SHEILD is going to run so many checks on him.

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I currently finished all of the chapters as of October 19th, 2021. This story is absolutely incredible and has a lot of potential if updates are continued. The only issue is the stability of updates and besides that, everything is amazing.