A/N - Pretty hard to describe this in a synopsis, so I'll just give y'all a rundown on what to expect. MC has lived two lives before reincarnating into the MCU. The first life was on our Earth, where he was an Athlete/Martial Artist. The second life, he was reborn in the Warhammer 40k universe on Catachan to a couple of Humans (Catachan Junglers). Eventually, of course, he fucking died just like nearly everything in Warhammer 40k. But he was given another chance at life along with his Catachan physiology, plus two extra powers. Powers as in genes. He has some Xenos and Abhuman genes in him, basically, and they'll give him physical buffs and whatnot. Pretty heretical, I know, but whatever. MC isn't gonna be all grimdark-y either - he's gonna have some humor to him.)
One of the best start of a novel i've read so far. The MC feels so natural like he had already embraced his 2 lives and what came out of it was a perfectly balanced grizzled warrior with a constant vigilance yet having the mind to banter around. Nevermind i think those traits come from being a Catachan Jungle Fighter itself lol. The writing quality is so good,there hasn't been much worldbuilding shown yet but from how the mc described his surroundings and his life, you can just imagine it with a little bit of knowledge of WH40k world and MCU, so far there has been only 2 other person shown but they feel like a person with their own mind, not a cardboard cut characters. And they had at most a couple paragraph worth time. The grammar side things, i don't have the qualification to judge those but from my personal view it seemed perfect. I would recommend this novel judging just by it's first 3 chapters, but i honestly don't know what would be my future opinion.
Im a simple man , I see 40k i like
Really really good so far keep up the good work wish there were more 40k stories out there but still love the storie cant wait for the next chapter👍👍
A few questions on the races you have chosen and will you be giving them the ability's that are available to them : - Orks generate a potent psychic gestalt field that allows them to accomplish many feats of technological engineering that might otherwise seem impossible. - Aeldari are a naturally psychic species, and all Asuryani possess the potential to become powerful psykers if they choose to pursue this path - Cadian Shock Troopers have some of the best equipment in Warhammer to draw on in the game. Troopers in general understand the inner workings on said equipment and have been known to modify it to fit their needs. Their muscles will be so thick that it counts as having flak armor, even without a shirt on. If you wax your chest and liberally apply oil, it acts similarly to Space Marine armour. Only Catachan veterans know why this works. (it's because almost everything will slide off your abs up to and including battlecannon shells) - Ogryn will form a bond of fellowship with a low-ranking officer or even regular Guardswomen. The simple minds of these hulking Abhumans can for reasons unknown become fixated upon a particular Human, especially if that Human shows them kindness (or just happens to be in the right place at the right time). Once an Ogryn connects with an Imperial soldier in this way, the bond becomes almost unbreakable. Reports from various warzones confirm that this has happened on several occasions, with charismatic and courageous junior officers acquiring for themselves the undying loyalty of one of the Abhuman shock troopers. Just some of my thoughts the powers you could bring into the story,!!
Damn. this is really good! Though i dont know much about WarHammer 40K its an amazing story and im really looking forward for more... so... yeah!
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I actually got so invested into this…. Bruh where are the chapters
Yo this novel needs an update ASAP lol, catachan jungle fighter means being a roided up rambo with brass balls the size of of the chicago bean sculpture and consequently having them drag them across the battlefield, only the Kreigsman can even compare to them. I hope you stay safe out there, so you can update soon lol. Thank you for the gem of a novel
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Yes more warhammer 40K is needed here. There is so little fanfics written For it here please keep writing it...................................
Very good start and pace i hope this novel will continue for a while and the only problem i have is i need more chaps.
As I have said Great start!! Now a question " How Dark are you going to go with this? You have set your self on a path that could take this in a number of ways, I just want to know if you are going to go full 40 k or if you are going "Bleach"[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] the hell out of it LOL!!!!