The plot of this story is absolutely stunning. It can easily hook the readers. The dialogues are the perk of this story. They are raw and realistic which is commendable. I would like to suggest the author to divide the paragraphs wisely. Somewhere in the first chapter, one of the paragraphs was poorly spaced which kinda irritated me. So I would request you to edit the chapters and rest everything is top-notched. Great work. Cheers to the author.
4 years ago
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WolfyHime_Writes
Very Nice Story, It is cool the way how you wrote it, It is very unique I love it... Can't wait for more updates I will highly recommend this to everyone[img=recommend]
4 years ago
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Joondabest_
how the author thinks and imagines the characters makes the story even more intriguing. The concepts and perspectives are crystal clear! loved the work! keep it up, author!
4 years ago
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Bethel_Gold
this is a beautifully and nicely written book.
how you compose and explain the chapter is totally great!!
this is awesome and I'm looking towards more chapters from you
4 years ago
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not_sou_serious
Oh this book is awesome...
I am in love with your style of writing the storyline.
Ah.. I like stories where not all focus is pointed at the 2 main characters.
I believe that all characters contribute in creating great plots and making the main characters more interesting and indulging.
I really like how you envisioned this story.
Kudos to the author. If you love some book filled with angst, romance with some good plot twists then you should definitely read this.
All the best 👍
4 years ago
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igb9nak5
I really felt like, I was in a movie your story is truly septacula and I'm looking forward to reading more. I think it's really interesting.
4 years ago
0
phoenixhyperion
Well, this is the first time I get to read a book written like a movie script. It's simplicity brought freshness in my mind as I read. Wonderfully crafted characters, nicely portrayed background.
Its really good. Great job there author! Keep up the good work!
4 years ago
0
TheDragon1231
A short and direct synopsis about what the novel will be about, I like it. The construction of the character is seen to take a lot of effort. I liked the story and I will be up to date for a new chapter.
4 years ago
0
TanY
The story seems very interesting. The characters are quite good too. Keep up ur good work author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
4 years ago
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GenXPrays
The love that stops loving: Is it heartbreak !?
Put the parts together again. Eternal love!?
Heartbreak really makes you sick. Family love can do nothing.
A professional of heart problems, in a woman's body. It is the solution to wake up the sick by heartbreak.
It proposes an exciting and good read to follow ...
4 years ago
0
L_StellaLuna
This book speaks of different types emotions. The synopsis may not shown much but as I started to read each chapters. It ignites excitement and curiosity that gets me hook up. Can't wait on how the story unfolds. Definitely worth the read! ❤️
4 years ago
0
Ndidi_Otuya
love the honesty and simplicity of your synopsis, wonderful character building, i already love the plot, your writing quality is waaay up there, good job ;)
4 years ago
0
Dr_Awan00
I love the way they complete each other. One filling her life with stability and happiness, the thing that she always wanted and other joining pieces of his broken self. The way of writing is commendable. Story is worth reading and spending your time. :)
4 years ago
0
Black_Rose_8013
The story seems very good. The characters are also quite interesting. There are some errors but otherwise the story is going quite well. Keep up the good work.
Kudos to the author!!!
4 years ago
0
WAP1884
Oh damn l love this book already. What is better than fixing a grumpy rich guy and possible falling in love. And she is doctor even better. Continue writing this book l wanna know more
The plot of this story is absolutely stunning. It can easily hook the readers. The dialogues are the perk of this story. They are raw and realistic which is commendable. I would like to suggest the author to divide the paragraphs wisely. Somewhere in the first chapter, one of the paragraphs was poorly spaced which kinda irritated me. So I would request you to edit the chapters and rest everything is top-notched. Great work. Cheers to the author.
Very Nice Story, It is cool the way how you wrote it, It is very unique I love it... Can't wait for more updates I will highly recommend this to everyone[img=recommend]
how the author thinks and imagines the characters makes the story even more intriguing. The concepts and perspectives are crystal clear! loved the work! keep it up, author!
this is a beautifully and nicely written book. how you compose and explain the chapter is totally great!! this is awesome and I'm looking towards more chapters from you
Oh this book is awesome... I am in love with your style of writing the storyline. Ah.. I like stories where not all focus is pointed at the 2 main characters. I believe that all characters contribute in creating great plots and making the main characters more interesting and indulging. I really like how you envisioned this story. Kudos to the author. If you love some book filled with angst, romance with some good plot twists then you should definitely read this. All the best 👍
I really felt like, I was in a movie your story is truly septacula and I'm looking forward to reading more. I think it's really interesting.
Well, this is the first time I get to read a book written like a movie script. It's simplicity brought freshness in my mind as I read. Wonderfully crafted characters, nicely portrayed background. Its really good. Great job there author! Keep up the good work!
A short and direct synopsis about what the novel will be about, I like it. The construction of the character is seen to take a lot of effort. I liked the story and I will be up to date for a new chapter.
The story seems very interesting. The characters are quite good too. Keep up ur good work author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The love that stops loving: Is it heartbreak !? Put the parts together again. Eternal love!? Heartbreak really makes you sick. Family love can do nothing. A professional of heart problems, in a woman's body. It is the solution to wake up the sick by heartbreak. It proposes an exciting and good read to follow ...
This book speaks of different types emotions. The synopsis may not shown much but as I started to read each chapters. It ignites excitement and curiosity that gets me hook up. Can't wait on how the story unfolds. Definitely worth the read! ❤️
love the honesty and simplicity of your synopsis, wonderful character building, i already love the plot, your writing quality is waaay up there, good job ;)
I love the way they complete each other. One filling her life with stability and happiness, the thing that she always wanted and other joining pieces of his broken self. The way of writing is commendable. Story is worth reading and spending your time. :)
The story seems very good. The characters are also quite interesting. There are some errors but otherwise the story is going quite well. Keep up the good work. Kudos to the author!!!
Oh damn l love this book already. What is better than fixing a grumpy rich guy and possible falling in love. And she is doctor even better. Continue writing this book l wanna know more