Into marvel as a celestial

story could be interesting but the grammar and overall english will probably fry your brain if you try to read it............................

first of all I love the idea, it has so much potential...... Buuuuuuut! the execution is simply horrible, the grammar, the pacing even the spacing. again great idea, proofread it.

Awesome story. It is one of the best op series that i have seen till now . Keep it up. Don't drop . It has alot of potential man. 💯🥳🔰😝😊🤑👝👻😤✌🙂😇🙏😆👍💀😃😍🤣🤣💕❤💯🥳🔰

Hard to read, hard to understand, requires you to edit the novel yourself just to read it, also its fan-fic about the marvel universe, I dont know why its in the novel section.

The grammar is horrible and the sentences are horibbly structured ................................................................................

I just can't man, I would read more but I noped out from reading the first chapter. The grammar is beyond terrible. This would be a great read if chapters were edited and grammar was fixed.

Looks like it was written by a child tbh ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

If you could stop rewriting the story with only the mc being a celestial and the rest being completely different from the previews versions and simply make them into different stories that would be great. Also, I don't understand how, after so many different versions of the story, your english is still so horrible? One would think that you would improve your english after rewriting the story so many times...

Amazing. What you did my friend is beyond plus ultra. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Very Nice book , I'm very excited to read the story further. Please update chapters soon. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I and my poor friend, godzilla had a heart attack and died from reading this BAD WRITING vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

I wonder will he become destroyer. So he can balance the creation In the universe. I love op Mc forever.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Dude This So Cool And Op We need more chapters I wanna know what happens next.... .. . .............. ...... ....... ............ .......... .....

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