Into The Demon Apocalypse: Hell On Earth
Damian Cross, a young man in his late 20s. Once hailed as a child prodigy, currently the Director of New York Central Health with a Ph.D. in Neurosurgery. Successful; that's what comes to mind when one hears of him, but... is that all there is to know? Of course not. Here is a creature devoid of any human emotion and ambition in the shell of a man. Hiding in that shell is complete darkness. An emptiness that seems to swallow every and anything it comes in contact with.
It was that emptiness that led Damian to answer that message on his phone that day. The day the end of the world began. The message, sent by one who goes by the name 'TheGingerbreadFriend', read:
“I will grant you one wish.”
You know what they say, be careful what you wish for.
Because of his wish, the world is plunged into total chaos in a matter of seconds as extra-terrestrial creatures (Demons) invade earth, and humans, old or young, male or female are told to partake in the 12 phases of the Apocalypse.
That wish of his? To simply return home.
Now Damian will face demonic invaders from an unknown realm as countless mysteries unfold. Despite bringing about the end of humanity, he is merely a cog in the machinations of fate alongside the wheels of time.
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[Phase 1: Choose A Side]
Objective: Kill 1 or more humans
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This novel is gonna be pure art. I advise you give it a go.
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NOTE: THIS NOVEL IS STRICTLY RATED 'PARENTAL GUIDANCE'. I'm just saying it might be too 'scary' for some readers. Prepare for gore.
This is great, a bit late on update but still great... Love the story line💖💖💖_ makes me wonder how the webtoon adaptation is going to be. I really want to support u. Hope this words of encouragement is enough, keep up the good work. Just know u have a fan in me XOXO, Sire_gram.😎
Welp. since no one wants to give me a review. Read novel has many mysteries and hidden details so if you don't understand smth you'll most likely see and answer in a later chapter.I'll give a genuine review of my own novel when I'm above 100 chapters I guess.
I was so immersed into the storyline I forgot to check for errors 😅 But one thing I know is that this is a beautiful write-up. From the writing style to the plot development, to the introduction of characters, it was all well done. The plot progression was just perfect, there was no lag nor was there any confusion. I loved reading it and I will continue supporting it 😍😍
Your story is interesting, great background and plot, i think your Mc is really nice too, yes, it has one and two grammatical errors, but that is normal, i expect to see more chaps and you did a great job overall amazing story.
Writing quality - 3 stars No obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary (also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying) Update stability - 3 stars I'm neutral Story development - 3 stars The pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm) Character design - 2 stars Characters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality (mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke) World background - 2 star Rarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity (there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting) It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obvious Good to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...
Amazing writing skills 👌, loving the world background and also loving the MC already. Plot is great and story development seems to be going well too. keep up the good work dear author!
I like the story so far great plot and not too cliche of a horror story beginning but it really helps and develops as our MC continues on and his squad
This plot looks like it's going to get pretty interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, the grammar is great, and the writing has a modern, fast-paced structure to it. Must read!
I rate this story 5/5 it has a great plot and has pretty good character development in the early stages which is good and I like how the story line is unique a little in its main purpose. The updates are late but I found out why so I won't be deducting any points from the score. Other then that I can't wait for future chapters and I wish the author luck for this story.
Loved the characters model and the world background is interesting.....and minimum grammatical errors, that's what I like and the silent kid Arthur Is good addition. I like it.
Intereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssstttttttttiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnggggg👍👍👍 yes that is right, this novel is interesting. I really like MCs that are not the average good guy, but rather interesting and a good story to tell.
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I’ve read to chapter 14 and I’ m bored already. I might try to read it later and see if it gets better but i doubt it. 0/5 would not recommend
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