Tales from the wolf pack: Fall of the Red Wolf

It my humble opinion i recomend going through and fixing up the grammer and changing some words around to make it seem less childish and fixing plotholes. I havent read far enough yet but im hoping this book does not have middle school syndrome where he ends up befriending all of his enemys and cant kill a fly. In the first few chapters is quite vauge and he depends to much on others and ends up not doing anything himself such as the mana core (Kinda need to keep secrets or else people will find something off and problem solving without the help of others he is an adult??) and reading he is supposed to have the mind of an adult but cant teach himself to read or train himself and complains he is not as good as others