"From now on, let the world feel pain." Above Konoha, Uzumaki Naruto started to talk indifferently, throwing out a large spiral wheel that was as dark as ink in his hands, bursting with endless light and heat, and razing everything he saw. One was not influenced by Asura Chakra, one lived in harmony with Kurama since childhood, one received modern compulsory education since childhood, and the other watched the entire "Naruto". A different Naruto story.
(i did not create this, just fixed some grammar https://comrademao.com/novel/let-the-world-feel-pain/)
dude even cuz of the bad reviews, keep editing the novel, I like it I don't really see a problem nor do I care dude even cuz of the bad reviews, keep editing the novel, I like it I don't really see a problem nor do I care dude even cuz of the bad reviews, keep editing the novel, I like it I don't really see a problem nor do I care
this is a mess even if you can get past the wuxia stuff the fanfic itself don't make sense sometimes this fanfic must be MT don t bother reading it
Don’t bother reading. It’s good in the beginning, but in the end Naruto turns into a typical cultivation novel protagonist, arrogant as ****. The whole story completly changes direction and becomes a comedy harem
keep it going. loving the way its headed and the fact that Naruto is not some common simp chump to be pushed around! kill the hokage, danzo, and the other pos lord waste of space. make konaha bleed!
A great read and we'll designed character growth. I like that the author is not keeping with the MC being a simp nor a goody goody that forgives everything done to him.
Can barely read it, is a Google translation, is too confusing where and when he is. Which pov it is and what is going on in the story. I Believe it is probably an amazing story in Chinese but horrible in this translation.
Writing quality is kinda meh, with google translate you can convert some Chinese words into English. Liu = sixth, dao = path. So liu Dao is sixth path, and there's also six dao = six paths too.
This is actually a pretty good fanfiction without much propaganda for social credits. But the only downside is horrible Grammer and horrible choice of wordings for character interactions. Its so horrible that my brain cells can't take it anymore, so I have no choice but to drop it. Pity that this one has so much potential.
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it just suck no need more to say not worth it iikikkikkkkkkkkkkkkk
Me encantó, la trama es muy interesante y el giro de naruto también es muy inesperado, además los cambios que ocurren a otros personajes gracias al cambio abismal del personaje principal realmente son impresionantes. :3