Emperor Who Rules Over The Swords
[ WSA 2021 ENTRY - Transmigration ]
The main character, “Cayle”, was once a well-known gamer, however, due to the changing ranking, he was soon out talented by the newly uprising ones and plummeted to the very bottom of the society.
Quite messily trashed, the main character “Cayle” found himself, drowning in misery while scrolling up and down upon the mouse connected to his very own personal computer.
As he was sipping his dried lips upon the lid of the bottle of cola on his side, while his gloomy eyes glued itself into his personal computer, the notification bell rung in alarmed.
The main character, “Cayle” thought it was a blessing, however, upon downloading the application filed inside the empty website, he was welcomed by two options appearing inside the monitor.
[Are you ready to enter a new world?]
[Yes] Or [No]
Without hesitating, the main character chose the [Yes] option, and soon, his field of view began to feel drowsy, and his breathing slowly came to halt. His heart that was beating lively a while before, was now like a corpse, as it froze in it’s place.
He thought he was done for…. Really done for.
However, when he opened his eye lids again like any other day, a new world unfolded before his eyes….
… [Congratulations on being chosen as the user for the new life system]
What kind of future do awaits him in the latter parts, that he has to walk to..?
The main character, “Cayle” embarks to the journey before his very eyes, filled with anxiety and grief. The future awaits him remained unbeknownst.
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The descriptive writing style make this book great, I think readers that are gamers could relate to this especially to the main character. I like how detail it is so give this book a read, reader.
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
Interesting story and writing skills i could easily understand... The main character's attitude quite wimpy at first but kinda cool at d latest.
Great novel.🙌😁 Very few grammar errors if that bothers anybody. Also the storytelling is amazing and I love the author's way of writing. Most definitely this novel deserves a nomination award at least. as long as the author keeps up the good work she has a great chance.😁👍
User of the New Life System? Readers would be so hooked with this! Synopsis is also great that could let the readers add this book to their library. Author's narration is great, I'm immersed with it. If you are into transmigration, give this a read!
If I ever decide to venture into the system cultivation /transmigration genre, this would certainly be an example to go by. Unlike other system books where everything is so fast/spontaneous, this one lets us journey along with MC in the perfect pace. World background is unique and I enjoy the pace of character development and how the story develops in general. Congratulations to you, author. You did good by it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
not usually my cup of tea but the story telling is insanely superb.. the details are all laid out for the reader and i could sense that the author has put in much thought to the creation of such novel. kudos and keep writing dear author!
Great, this is a great novel. A truly descriptive world background with a good pacing, However, the character design is what is commendable, I liked how you described your MC so well to let the reader emphasize with his situation. For any readers that like the system and RPG theme this could be truly a great option. Great Job, author!
The writing is very detailed and poetic. Minor details with grammar aside, this is very interesting! Definitely give it a chance, people! I'm gonna keep an eye on this one :)
yoshhh....... this was another level of system novel, ! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! It's too detailed and imaginary, is that the right word? Anyway it's freakin good!!
SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p
Interesting story! It remembered me of Jumanji but the plot is different and very interesting. I feel like I am entering in the game. Lol😂. Great imagination. Keep it up! I cheer you!
The first part is literally beautiful and interesting. The descriptive writing is superb! The title is already interesting and then you read the story then it becomes much more interesting. No joke! I'll this in my library and read it for it is written by such a great fellow Filipino author of mine. Keep writing!
The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!