Re:Born - Necro

Sorry for the self reviewing. This is my novel that won the ScribbleHub Anniversary Contest and is finally being brought to other platforms. Hope you enjoy the read

I have read up to only 12 chapters but to be honest, ill outrightly say that this novel is exactly opposite to my preferences and expectations. I don't expect fidelity in a harem novel obviously, but when a person is willing to reincarnate for the sake of his loved one, I expect the person to think at least twice before getting into a relationship with a total stranger just because she was confessed to. Also, remind you that the first two-three chapters are a quagmire of errors and mistakes grammatically or spelling wise but it does get better from the 6th chapter onwards. knowing that one's daughter is a reincarnate isn't a new idea, but it kind of stunned me how ridiculously the father took the entire issue as. there isn't even a semblance of reality with what I had read in 12 chapters... this is my personal opinion and not an objective review. there might be people who may enjoy this novel but I do not.

Go for it Darky! *Pokemon sfx* EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP

really enjoying it so far. the characters are good, the world is interesting, and the development doesn't come in dumps. it feels organic, like it's actually happening and not being explained to the readers by the author. that being said, the biggest point of improvement I can think of is giving out more details of communication/observation in dialogue. it can devolve into screenplay-esque "he said: she said:" and that can be dry. giving every paragraph at least 2 sentences describing how it's said or an internal reaction help to both understand who's saying what and masking foreshadowing/character development details. it also helps as a crutch to remind you that your characters have bodies in a place instead of existing in your head. not something I noticed in your work, but what I use it for.

5 Stars. Keep up the good work! [img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = palmada]

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The plot is great and the character in story well written.Good job author I'm currently waiting for the update.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Very smooth transition into webnovel from scribblehub :D Keep writing!! 🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉

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