I died - and then I woke up, falling from the sky. I somehow stopped myself from falling into an orphanage - except I was still surprisingly hurt, so I still fell unconscious when I hit the grounds of the orphanage.
When I awoke, I was inside a room, with a nun cleaning my legs.
...What kind of weird situation had I found myself in now?
(A/N - If you don't like hero MC's, don't read. MC is gonna be like an anti-hero-ish Superman.)
You know what author? I always give credit where it's due, and this story is absolutely fantastic. The grammar is perfect, no complaints there. The emotions the MC feels and the thoughts that go through his head are completely realistic and the inner monologues very well done. Nothing today about the world background, It's MCU for God's sake. The character design is brilliant. This is the first decent MCU fabric where the MC has an actual fucking reason to pit himself against the Mad Titan. This guy had his empire utterly destroyed, his people experimented, his family exterminated, and his birthright not stolen, but rather destroyed. His planet is probably nothing but an empty husk and this leaves him with not only the thirst for revenge, but also the conviction to follow through and the powers needed to do so.
interesting, not enough fanfic on invincible hopefully the tv show gives it more attention but it's good its in marvel as the other fandom is boring
Is this harem? I hope not
Good concept and good grammar. A good way to incorporate Thanos into the MC's backstory and I'm interested in reading more.
the novel is excellent. the grammer is good, the backstory is amazing and i feel this story will go very far. its only 2 chapters so far but i can tell this will be in the ranking in the future if the author doesnt drop it.
Too much Invisible can do this to you. I recommend a daily dose of WandaVision, Falcon and Winter Soldier and if you feel Invincible's symptoms are too much, maybe add a small dose of Dr Who. As they say, a visit to the doctor a day keeps Invincible away.
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It very interesting and I like the viltrumite race from invincible series. It also refreshing to see a crossover alien hero that's not kryptonian.
Great story I hope to see more of your work in future .......................................................................................
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Great beginning and good way in putting thanos in the story.....................,,,,,,................................. Great for you to ha.
Great start,how old is he tho? if he's still barely a teen then you should tone down his powers
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