Divine mind and body
Author: Borjasss
4.36
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It happened without warning or reason, one day, suddenly, the game began, the world changed, the dead rose, the beasts mutated, and humans ..... What will bring them to this bloody and cruel game where only the stronger and more cruel?
In this chaotic and cruel world, a power, a force, an empire arose, which swept the entire world, unifying all races with overwhelming power.
No one could match him, no one could stop him in his conquest and his eternal quest for power.
With the world in his hand and all beings under his feet, Adriel gazed up at the infinite starry sky with an insatiable thirst.
"I'll make it mine" he thought with a smile, full of ambition and power.
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Amazing book. Now and then you use the wrong pronouns but I believe you will be able to fix that and other than that It's an amazing story full of potential[img=update][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the story so far. Its not everyday you get to read an apocalypse novel. I just suggest that you fix your writing quality. You keep switching between she and he to refer to the mc. Couple of grammar issues but nothing really infuriating. Keep it up ma guy.
It is a good novel with a lot of potential but the grammar is so annoying, the author doesn't know the difference between a female, a male and it. Which is really annoying because you always have to think about it and correct it yourself
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Estar esta bien, los capitulos son cortos pero intensos, entiendes o que quiero decir. Sigue subiendo capítulos, no está nada mal. Ánimo colega, lo haces bien.
Not bad in general, good, the plot is good and the world is fine. You can also more chapters. Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,GoodGood.
Not bad in general, the chapters are a little short, but other than that good, the plot is good and the world is fine. You can also upload more chapters
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I liked it, it has some annoying clichés, but otherwise, it remains faithful to the proposal presented since the first chapters............
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pretty decent so far, the mc is extremely overpowered i guess it makes sense he rules the world or whatever that cryptic sentence was in the synopsis
I love apocalypse related novels, especially if they have romance, and they are very hard to find so I have high expectations for this novel. After reading more I'll edit my review to either increase or decrease my score. Btw the grammar could be a bit better, but it is readable, I've seen much worse.