I Am A Ninja In A Cultivation Wold: Journey With My Futuristic Phone
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As I am playing my mobile phone suddenly vibrates and a message pops up, I tried to swipe to clean it up but strangely I can't, I have no choice but to choose Update!
But then, after waiting for five minutes and the installation finally finished, another message appears and this time, it is a survey asking for childish things.
1] If you would get reincarnated, what situation of the world you want to go to?
2] If you can bring something to your reincarnation, what is it?
3] If you would get reincarnated, what status do you want?
4] If you could get reincarnated, what type of profession do you want? (Cultivation, Warrior, Mage, Gunner, or Others)
5] Are you ready for reincarnation?
Without me expecting that it is not a joke, I answered it while laughing.
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This book got me hooked from the very first chapter. Five Stars because the book deserves it. Love everything about the book. keep going Author 💟
Overall, the idea of the plot's good,but some more development on the author's part would do some good, especially when expressing some sentences, but then, experience is the best teacher, so I expect the author will only get better as he/she continues writing. Keep it up.
I really like the word you've created. Your main character is likable. I think there is some things you can improve on like your grammar and punctuation. But other then that this is a really cool story and I wish you the best of luck!