ONE PIECE : TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND..
This tale is about a boy that was abandoned and left to the mercy of the seas ,while he was in the sea a figure saw him and saved him ,raised him and made him a powerful figure on par with the strongest people to ever live ,join our protagonist EDWARD LINCOLN on his way to unparalleled strength and authority.
first fanfic ,my English grammar isn't very good but I'll try my best .
leave your suggestions in the comments .
I'll try to update as fast as I can but sometimes I won't be able to post for an interval of time due to my preparation for entrance examinations
some future plans
I plan on introducing some characters from other stories and stuff . so y'all can anticipate some crossovers . and seeing the concept on ki ,yes I have used some inspiration from manhwas and the dragon Ball series .and I will have some crazy concepts of power and I don't want my MC to be downgraded by anyone so he will be kinda op.
my grammar isn't the best and the first chapters prove it but along the way I improve so that I can convey what's on my mind .
and the people who said that I do what I did to the one piece world ...it's a fanfic for a reason and try to look past the normal world building of the one-piece world and try this one a chance :)
One piece belongs to eichiiro oda ,the only thing mine are the OCS I made and some extra islands I tuned to fit in the world .
too fast mate,the story develop too fast,just hope you could slow down the pace of the story,in just 3 chapter he got to admiral strength, it's too fastt
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You are writing a nice book as a fellow author I can tell that your story has very good potential keep writing and we will be always waiting for new releases
Captain Usopp's was killed on the way to Laugh Tale and see his sweetest dream in the underworld, lol. Pitiful parody of Path to Power. So boooooooring.
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I think this story has a lot of potential. Key points to look out for: 1) use of dialogue, think you could Make use of more dialogue. the entire story is written in Lincolns thoughts with sparse use of dialogue. 2) character development: The story is too focused on Physical development and has ignored much of lincolns mental development 3) world sEtting: the entire transition to rocks Pirates, the worlD government, strength levels are not too clear Even with the auxiliary chapter 4) Story pace: reading just the first few chapters, it Already the gives the feeling that the story will end in 10-15 chapters max. You want to make sure you have a modest goal in terms of how long this fanfic will be and pace yourself to achieve that goal
Interesting story but poorly written... The writing style and the bad grammar make it somewhat hard to have fun reading this. With an editor this might become a rather good story.
Bro this is my favourite, i liked the powel scale in the one piece verse of this fic its amazing. ive read too many ”cliche” one piece fanfictions but this one blew my mind with all the suprises i shed a couple tears with xebec and the duo
One of the best ond peice novels I’ve read Hggff dcghf F gfgfhfgcggfggghfffugfhvhbgffhfffhhdhfgfhgfggggfggfy F F and j F b
So i have started this story, and i am not sure if i am willing to put in time to read it. Mainly pointing towards the use of grammar and messy paragraphs all along since the get go. All i can see tho from the reviews, it's super overrated, grammar is leaning towards machine translations, even if it is not. just to put a perspective on it. Main character is quite a fresh thing, not what is usual for mc's to build on, i like the start of the story but. it's a major turn of with the grammar and how quick paced it is. No offence to author.
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This is a good story but I must ask what happen to keido and big mom bc it seem they died and if they are who will be the empire in the new world?
It's quiet interested, in which not mention of the background of protagonist but start with rock pirates era as a son of whiteboard which is quite interesting and also the story devolopment is also quite good but the tier thing didn't made scence waiting for further updates.
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