Warrior Training System
Cassian Ven Dyke, the bastard son of a powerful ducal family, grew up in the slums of Veldora under the care of his father figure, sword master Russel. When Russel passed away, Cassian was left with only a silver necklace as his inheritance. After putting it on, Cassian was attacked by three psychotic thugs who tortured him in an attempt to steal the necklace. Refusing to give in, Cassian was ultimately stabbed through the heart with the very same necklace. Instead of dying, he mysteriously vanished as the necklace lodged itself in his heart. Just before disappearing, he heard an eerie message echo in his mind:
[True mana detected. Origin: Human...]
[Human detected. Compatibility with system: Confirmed.]
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Okay, listen up—this novel is basically a masterpiece because, well, I wrote it. I mean, it's almost unfair to other writers how good this is. You’re about to dive into the most gripping, hilarious, and downright genius story ever created by yours truly. Don’t worry, you’ll be fine—just keep a glass of water nearby because you might choke on how amazing it is. Seriously though, read it. You’ll thank me later.
Score: 8/10 On first look one might think think this is just a shallow lustful fantasy novel. But if you were to look deeper you will notice that the book has very good writing quality and pace. And a very honest approach to the story premise. The mc in the story is a curious child with not much information about the world(very horny as well). And guess what the mc acts exactly as the description. He asks questions when something new comes up exactly like a child. He gets angry when he dosent get what he wants and happy when he gets it. He has a naive approach to life and is easily tricked by adults. He is oblivious to hidden information because he dosent have enough emotional experience. And I love this fact about this novel. So many books loose this aspect. In order to write a great saga they overdramatize the mc’s mindset. But this book really tries to be realistic. I as a reader dosent mind if a mc is stupid, simp, emo, cold hearted, shy, brave, etc. but I really hate conflicting behaviors. And this book does not do that at all. Another good thing is the system is not overbearing. So many system novels just make the mc into a freak of nature, giving them borrowed power in the form of free skills and stats. This system is very fair it’s more like an instructor which supports the natural growth of the mc. Everything the mc achieves is through his hard work with the guidance of the system. The pacing if the story is also good. My dosent just become best warrior in the kingdom in 2 months. He is still a kid learning how to fight, honing his basics by 2 months. One can really see how overtime the mc is getting comfortable with the surrounding cast. And there is a good breaks between big story events in a way to have a realistic picture. Only things that irritates me is that the mc is too smart abt the horny stuff early on. Because I always have to ask the question ‘how?’ In conclusion, don’t just judge this book by this cover, there is much more to this novel than it seems. If you are a fan of slow paced light hearted novels I think this one is a good choice.
nothing plot worthy happens on 31 chapters “warrior training system” for one is a throw off he trains like twice in those 31 chapters his a submissive servant boy (if you like that good for you) and he’s just be toying with
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Story alone has potential but I really cant understand ppl who like it. Mc is a one big failure. Dude is the definition of sumbissive beta simp loser. Serving a daughter of a duke while she assaults and makes fun of u is one thing but the same thing happens with simple maids. Sick
fan of this author since SONG pls continue it. as for this new work it seems good. it's starting but more story oriented then other. haven't seen any snu snum but knowing the author there will be lot in future. looking forward to future updates.
Author san please make this one full of lemons too
I like this one then the other till now. Still 12 ch so can't say more. Give it a try. And autjor add more lemons.[img=More pls][img=update]
liked the start but as it went around ch 15+, the story is going nowhere. like i am at chapter 35( while writing this review) but there is no major change in the story or developement. What does the system do, what he practices, or what is his thinking not much is mentioned. and its more like he is a side mob who we see in when only other characters are around.
75 chaps and mc is just learning the basics of the power system which in he is not even level 1… it’s not bad but it’s too slow, the background world is not fleshed out much in 70 plus chaps he stays in the mansion of the powerful family for most of it while begin a pervert Snice with his master which has condition where she is always uncomfortable and needs to be massaged every couple hours
Nice revenge plot and interesting mc with a lot of story arc potential.
I like the authors other works. this novel starting is better then his other. the main character doesnt seem like a psychopath for now and I hope he stays that way.
I understand people who are mad at the beginning of this book, but you also have to understand bros like 13 was a orphan of course he's going to do everything he can to stay in the good graces of those helping him plus at this point in the story he's not even a little bitch anymore the novel is starting to turn into one of my favorite on this app if he keeps heading in this direction.