My Shitty Isekai Adventure

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Alright, mate. Your novel, quite good, but don't make it too fast or too slow, it'll ruin your novel! ..................................................

I'm too lazy to be detailed but it's a good story so far. The gist of it seems to be a fantasy adventure with a touch of comedy. The one thing that stands out is the 'system. It's a great deal more credible as to the hows and whys of its existence from the get go. I like it when the OP and meta elements actually make sense.

Pretty good read so far, this is a good example of an isekai that manages to be something on its own. The protagonist, Zhang Wei, is transported to another world and has the unlikely partner of an AI he dubs Jinx following the seemingly comedic reaction Zhang initially had. It's straightforward writing at its best, but it's not confusing of course. I'm impressed with how the author made Zhang genuinely confused about his surroundings but it's not too exaggerating. My only real criticism would be the world Zhang is in, hasn't really strike me just yet, but hopefully we'll see more of the uniqueness of the world in later chapters. So far so good. Keep on writing.

Love the idea of an AI partner. It's like he's watching over Wei and giving him advice, but he's too under-leveled to be of any substantial use at the moment. Good start!