Days of my Life: Rewrite
Kakashi has lived a sheltered life within the protective confines of a barrier, which shielded them from the dangers that lurk outside. Raised by his devoted mother, Ako, and loving sister, Tokah, he only know a world of happiness and joy. Living in a world where he thought nothing could go wrong.
But when a group of men invades their home, everything changes. In the brutal assault, Kakashi witnesses his mother's tragic death, a moment that shatters his naive understanding of safety. While his sister manages to escape, Kakashi is captured and subjected to experiments designed to exploit his hidden powers.
Years later, amidst the ruins of a collapsing facility, granting Kakashi a chance at freedom. Rescued by an academy dedicated to training gifted individuals, he discovers not only the extent of his abilities but also the resolve to seek vengeance against those who tore his family apart.
Driven by the desire to reunite with Tokah and avenge his mother's murder, Kakashi embarks on a journey filled with action and self-discovery.
As he navigates the treacherous underbelly of a world rife with superhuman conflicts, he must confront his own problems while mastering the very powers that once made him a target.
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NOTE: slow start, little romance, MC gets stronger as the story progress
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If you spot any mistake, please comment on that paragraph so I can correct it
it really hard to find novel like this, I guess that why it isn't popular... yet keep on writing, I really like the novel even though they are some mistakes
yet to read, I want to finish the first novel first
great story so far, even better than the first novel
Your story beautifully weaves emotion, tension, and world-building, creating a compelling narrative that draws me in. The vivid characters, rich lore, and engaging dialogues make the story both heartfelt and immersive. It's a captivating journey so far.. Keep it up!
A very nice one, I mean, I kept imagining it looking like an anime in my head. Kakashi is a really great character and I think he's my favourite so far. Nice one, author. Big ups!
it's been great story so far , though there's still somekind of trigger when i read the few first chap , it's like you remember the scene from anime somewhere else. but there's also some needs to be modification or editing some mistake. keep it up author !! also for the mc wifey🔥📢
The story is good enough for you to execute, but there are some uses of diction that are... Unstable if I may say, there are some at the beginning that already use good diction, but you don't continue in some other narratives, and there are some pretty big plot holes in some chapters, like something that isn't really explained well, some character designs are also only explained in some characters but not for the main characters, the development is not good enough, the world background is still too vague, ta but I have explained some pretty strong reasons, that's all from me, keep up the spirit my author!!
The story well isnt new but it add enough flavor to be more interesting to read, it started pretty strong but that held back from being decent is the grammar mistake and the writing sometimes appears bland? It is not very interesting to read; I would suggest the author add some flair to the words or sentences. Great start. held back by its writing style.
Read till the 6th chap and it was good so far. Well written and good character design and story development❤️. Very much interested bout their supernatural ability and the karma thingy hehe😁
An interesting story with a well thought out world and lots of lore to sink your teeth into. If you like action fantasy with supernatural powers, this will be your thing 👍
absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥
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