Game Of Thrones: Tommen The Great

I truly enjoy this story. The pacing of the story itself is done very well. The plot moves along in each chapter quick enough that it doesn’t feel like a slog and slow enough that I don’t feel like things are a blur. The design of the main character comes across well and he feels truly integrated into the world of Westeros. I also enjoyed his interactions with the characters so far and hope to see how his relationship with his grandfather and mother has developed in the future. The way you introduce things is also well done it is not info dumped onto you and feels natural. The story is still new so I can’t really gauge update stability yet. Once more the story is published I’ll be able to really tell if it develops well overtime. All in all my eyes have been blessed (Grammatically) compared to what I have seen and read on this site. Keep it up 👍🏾. P.S. I do have some questions. Will there be more OC’s and the story is tagged harem so how big are you going or have you changed you mind on that? Another is will you have other POV’s to give it that ASOIAF feel or mainly focus on Tomman? Just a final question how will Dorne factor into this (Arianne Martell??)? Regardless if you answer, good luck 🍀 and I hope this helps you grow as a writer if that is your passion. -Hmm...this is one of my rare reviews

I am actually kind of surprised. The quality of this book is unexpectedly good. I expected for the story to degrade as the plot continued bur oh, what a surprise I received. The emotions portrayed by the character, the descriptive scenes, and how the plot has developed till now has been fantastic and I can't wait to read more of this.

I am both surprised and delighted by your story. You are a much better writer than me, and I can't wait to read more. The story's pace is good. The characters feel like real people and aren't two dimensional. The fights are well written, and the writing style is surprisingly entertaining and fun all on its own. I rarely do reviews, but that's just how much I liked what I read so far. Only things I'd point out story wise to make the MC slightly more proactive. He's a prince and a strong fighter. But, he's still vulnerable to schemes and what not. His mere presence changes things, thats why sticking too closely to canon and waiting for events to happen isn't wise. Writing wise, I'd recommend inserting a few more POVs especially of characters like joffery and Cersi. I am just nitpicking by this point, but overall I'm quite happy buy what I have read so far.

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There have been too many good Game of Thrones fan fictions that have been dropped or cancelled early on. Hopefully this goes on till the end.

Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.

Mc is strong, good humor, not bad romance. I hope it will harem. Recommend reading because it's best GoT fanfic I have seen so far. Even tho I didn't see much

It's a game of thrones character with a super-soldier serum. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.Great story. Good writing. I just hope you don't drop it. I like it that you didn't make him too op.Also please keep up the regular updates.

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Your doing a great job so far and I've been enjoying it ☺️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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This is actually very good the writeing quality is amazing and You take time to show your charecters motivations and you also make these motivations the driveing force for the charecter in some famfics the charecter just does something without any motivations. you do well with this and actually hive your charecter real personality. i also like how you use different povs you dont overuse them you use them to bring to light certain story elements and guve attention to certain things instead of useing them for the sake of having a diffrent pesective.