Young Georgie - I Have Nice Hair

The writing is good, no grammar mistakes, and it's a good story. GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!

So far in, only 9 chapter as of now and my review is. Writing Quality : 4 ⭐ The story is pretty well written, it's also a singer MC type of story, but I think this story will use more pop, indie or melancholic songs more, but there's has only been 1 song sang so I won't really set the stone there yet, also love the MC personality, and the bonding missy and Georgie had at a certain chapte, but there are some unnecessarily dark part like when he mention George possibly dying of heart attack leaving him and the others broken, and the part at the dinner table at a certain chapter where he talks about the magic of family dinner where maybe one person will be gone tommorow, etc. So yeah, 4 ⭐ only for the unnecessary dark turn, but it's still good. Story development : 4 ⭐ Also not much since it's only been 9 chapters, but it's at a moderate pace, not too fast, not too slow, the development of the characters are still early, but it's already showing through Georgie interactions with Missy and Sheldon, albeit still not much. Character Design : - (5 ⭐) I put "-" because the character design is literally just the tv version of them (my opinion) cause there's no picture, so I'm basing it off the TV, so not much to judge here, meaning I gave it a 5 ⭐ for standard. Updating Stability : 5 ⭐ It seems to be updating quite frequently so kudos to the author! World background : 3 ⭐ Will change later, but as of now the setting has only been school and home, so not much to see as of now. Overall : 4.2 ⭐ I highly recommend if you're looking for a Young Sheldon or a Big Bang Theory fanfic. Just hope the author can keep up the pace cause this can be very fun to read. My face making this review in the toilet taking after just taking my most massive dump :

The fanfic seems good overall but I really should rewrite the ROB part, it's completely unnecessary.‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

First time reading TBBT/YS FF... Nice Read... Please do continue.

Everything about it feels wrong Especially the grammar. I don't know why, the vibes are just off. Outside of the vibes, learn how to write in English before tackling this or use grammarly at least. Hell chatgpt would've been better than that shit.

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I really liked it, apart from people being suspicious, which really irritates, but leaving that aside, it really is a good story, I'm looking forward to more chapters. Please don't drop, receive my stones even though I'm not really hoping it helps I will support the author's decisions, to have more chapters hehe *I want more*

author, can't you rewrite the novel for when mc is born as a baby, it's really annoying that everyone in the family gets suspicious every time mc does something?

I'm just gonna say that this is one of the best writing I've ever read for a young sheldon fanfic, it has a good world background, and a really good development story so far that I've read in a while, and just hope this doesn't get dropped at all whatsoever.... and to the author of this fic please keep up the good work 😁👍😁👍

Gran historia autor, continua porfavor. De las mejores q he leído sobre series de televisión y eso q lleva pocos capítulos, mucho animo autor.

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This story is very good. Looking forward to more chapters!!! 🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼

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