Grammar is Terrible but still a little readable. Interesting story but as I said, the grammar ruins it. There are even times when the character names become chinese, comeon this is a japanese show, not a chinese wuxia xianxia bull.
4 years ago
62
cuddlypanda
Got to chapter 15 said there was no chapter released came Back on 10-20 Minutes later now has 70 chapters...... love you author for great work
4 years ago
53
J_Azura
the grammar is really bad, I can't understand anything. . .... . . . .
4 years ago
47
ktum
the story is good but the translation is a fxcking abomination and it's turn off all the excitement when I saw this fanfic basically it's just like when you buy something only from it outside appearance but the inside is not what it show from the cover outside.
4 years ago
30
VINCI88
Beautiful fanfiction.
Can we have the link in the original history in Chinese?
[img = consiglia]
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the grammar and sentences are terrible
some sentence makes absolutely no sense, the grammar is as messed up as porridge. almost unreadable.
I'm 80% sure, this is machine translated
4 years ago
13
DaoNinjaNinja
I see how some people argue that the novel has bad writing but it is to be expected for a novel that has be mtl (Machine Translation). You could find perthora of these type of writing in the mtl novel website. Some of the vote novel, you can find on there already. I have seen a novel that has 4000+ chapters. The fanfics that have anime plot; there a big chance the MC is going to have a chinese name.
It’s MTL what do you expect. Though it looks like a really good/fun story, would’ve been better if it was actually done through a real translator instead of this copy pasta
4 years ago
6
THEdiveneONE11
This is a story were our mc is a transmigater that reincarnated into the father of Sasuke Uchiha.As the mc is destined to be the Uchiha patriarch he makes it his life goal to save te Uchiha clan from destruction.
3 years ago
2
ScepticalFrog
Reveal Spoiler
10 days ago
1
kamal_victorian
It's just not my cup of tea. I hate this fic very much. Because it only had fight seens, nothing else.
MC gets a little stronger, add 5 chapter of NPC filler fight. He gets a little bit of interaction with others, add 5 chapter of NPC Filler fight.
I get it, they are on war. But the people MC fights atleast has to be a bit popular or something. Not random Jonin spawning out of knowhere.
Honestly it should more War, deafeating every Chunin and Jonin of other countries, I see. Rather something about MC making Uchiha clan stronger.
2 months ago
1
Rak_Mais1
I know that the translation is horrible, but I've been very busy these last few years, I'll try to edit it to improve it, but it won't be quick, my English isn't very good and I have little free time but I'll do my best
a year ago
1
Hsaet_Uchiha
up to 712 chapters Didn’t finished the story. No longer interested. I even forget what i read.
Grammar is Terrible but still a little readable. Interesting story but as I said, the grammar ruins it. There are even times when the character names become chinese, comeon this is a japanese show, not a chinese wuxia xianxia bull.
Got to chapter 15 said there was no chapter released came Back on 10-20 Minutes later now has 70 chapters...... love you author for great work
the grammar is really bad, I can't understand anything. . .... . . . .
the story is good but the translation is a fxcking abomination and it's turn off all the excitement when I saw this fanfic basically it's just like when you buy something only from it outside appearance but the inside is not what it show from the cover outside.
Beautiful fanfiction. Can we have the link in the original history in Chinese? [img = consiglia] ............................................................
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the grammar and sentences are terrible some sentence makes absolutely no sense, the grammar is as messed up as porridge. almost unreadable. I'm 80% sure, this is machine translated
I see how some people argue that the novel has bad writing but it is to be expected for a novel that has be mtl (Machine Translation). You could find perthora of these type of writing in the mtl novel website. Some of the vote novel, you can find on there already. I have seen a novel that has 4000+ chapters. The fanfics that have anime plot; there a big chance the MC is going to have a chinese name.
................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It’s MTL what do you expect. Though it looks like a really good/fun story, would’ve been better if it was actually done through a real translator instead of this copy pasta
This is a story were our mc is a transmigater that reincarnated into the father of Sasuke Uchiha.As the mc is destined to be the Uchiha patriarch he makes it his life goal to save te Uchiha clan from destruction.
Reveal Spoiler
It's just not my cup of tea. I hate this fic very much. Because it only had fight seens, nothing else. MC gets a little stronger, add 5 chapter of NPC filler fight. He gets a little bit of interaction with others, add 5 chapter of NPC Filler fight. I get it, they are on war. But the people MC fights atleast has to be a bit popular or something. Not random Jonin spawning out of knowhere. Honestly it should more War, deafeating every Chunin and Jonin of other countries, I see. Rather something about MC making Uchiha clan stronger.
I know that the translation is horrible, but I've been very busy these last few years, I'll try to edit it to improve it, but it won't be quick, my English isn't very good and I have little free time but I'll do my best
up to 712 chapters Didn’t finished the story. No longer interested. I even forget what i read.