Bloody Bi-, no Pussy! AHAHAHAHHA

Many people have been commenting on my novel and I love that I am getting all sorts of feedback, but some people are just complaining and I would like for this to stop.

It makes me feel like I am doing something wrong with the way I'm writing, or that it is a mistake that I'm writing, and this really demotivates me.

I am all for the feedback, but please make it productive, don't leave hate comments or show that you are getting bored of this novel, if you want to, just drop it, I would rather let you guys explore other amazing novels than get stuck on my novel which you don't like.

And for those who like BL or LGBT, please drop this novel, this will include none of those genres and even insult them, I mean no harm, but Astrid is a guy who want girls, not boys.

Sorry for this long rant, its just that I feel hurt inside.

Sincerely, the author

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"*Huff*Huff*Huff* I made it!" Astrid said as he glanced at the class, it could not be described as a class because it was in a stadium! Thousands of kids lined sitting in the seats.

"HEY ASS-TURD!" someone yelled from the crowd, it was Mark, funny enough, there were 2 golems next to him, probably handmade bodyguards.

"HELLO MY BELOVED CREATION!" Astrid yelled as he went down the stairs.

[Ekkk! The demon!] Marks system cried out.

'Shut up you pussy!' Mark talked back

[Am I your creator too!]

'No!'

"Come on! Let's tal.."

"ASTRID!" someone yelled as they ran into Astrids back, two plump bags of pleasure landed on Astrid's back making him feel heaven.

"Dawn! How are you doing!"

[Dawn Wave Status: (MISS YOU SO MUCH)]

"ASTRID!" another girl yelled infront of him.

"Oh, hi Flair!" Astrid was caught up in a tough situation.

[Dawn Wave Status: (YOUR MINE)]

[Wow, so much progress!]

'Fuck progress, if I give attention to one, the other attacks! Im gonna die!' many would kill Astrid for what he had just said.

[You got two girls, choose and kiss one and complete the mission! You could do it now!]

'Worst comes to worst, but I don't want to mess up the relationship...'

=My fans used to chase me, literally, do better Astrid...=

'Whatever...' Astrid ignored him

"Hello first years!" a domineering voice came from the podium centered in the middle of the stage, it was the principle of the academy, Griffin

Welcome to Skyrim Academy! Today is a very special day as today you will be unlocking your system's physical form!"

[???]

"Huh?" Astrid said out loud on accident, looking at the vice-principal with a shocked expression, he absolutely hated his system, for it do me in physical form would mean that he could torture it, it would be a blessing.

"Yes young man, your system will turn into a physical animal when you are given your egg. Also, why are you in the VIP section..." the vice-principal asked with murderous intent, it was well known that the VIP section was for noble families like the 10 great families, and many others.

"Aa-aaacck" Astrid was choking. Because of Vampire Queens Bloodlust, it doubled the amount of bloodlust making it unbearable for him! Even it was a C ranks bloodlust, it would automatically be upgraded to a rank A's bloodlust, overbearing Astrid.

"STOP!" both Dawn and Flair yelled at the principle causing him to retract this bloodlust with a puzzled expression.

"He is our guest today, so we will be letting him stay in the VIP section, is that ok?" Mark said activating his own pressure.

"S-Sure.. anyhow, today you will be activating your system's physical form. Your systems form my range from being a magical beast to being a real human! To do get this form, you must hatch an egg which the school shall be providing! Pass the eggs!" the man said as men passed an egg to each student.

Astrid and the rest of the people in the VIP section got special eggs that dropped from higher grade magical beasts. One of the many benefits of being a VIP.

"Wow, an egg! I hope mines becomes a super cool magical beast!" Flair said in joy.

"I hope mines becomes a human! What about you Astrid?" Dawn asked.

"Umm... a powerful being, so that I can protect you guys!" Astrid added in the end, both of them ended up in tears.

"Ok, so the way to hatch the egg is to pour your mana into the egg, it will greedily absorb your mana, the more mana you have, the more probability your system will find a suitable host! Pour in 3...2...1... Go!"

[Please no, don't do it! 100, no 1000 SP!]

"Sorry, nothing can change my mind!" Astrid said as he poured his mana into the egg.

[NOOO - System being absorbed into egg, using mana to insert - 0.5%]

[10%]

[50%]

[90%]

[99%]

[99.9%]

[100%]

[Absorbing complete!]

"Once you get the notification "Absorbing Complete", wait until your egg hatches. You can use the rest of the period as free time until your egg hatches!" the vice-principal said as he left the stage.

'Ok, system?'

[...]

'Xiao Fen?'

{...}

'Angel?'

=...=

'Greg?'

-...-

'My parents?'

'...'

'That's right, their gone...' Astrid mourned for less than a nanosecond before Mark barged in.

"Hahah, are you happy I saved you!" Mark asked before trying to slap him in the back, Astrid dodged making the seat that he was in turn into stone.

"You thought you could do such a cheap move."

"Well, I'll try later, anyway, what is your race?" Mark asked him.

"Cat-beast, duh, what's yours."

"Bull-beast." Mark said as he pointed to his horns.

"So, what is your system?"

"...Huh?" Astrid didn't know what to say. He can't say he has a system that gets girls as that is just disgusting.

"Do I have to say it aga-" Mark said before they heard a crack from Flair's egg.

"Oh-Oh My God! I got a phoenix, a phoenix! Ah-" she fainted.

Dawns cracked soon after that becoming a little girl.

"I'm gonna call you Chi-Chi, you call me big sis!"

"Ok..." Chi-Chi said blatantly, Dawn's system really wanted to be a taller woman, but whatever.

"AW HELL YEAH!" someone yelled in Astrid's ear.

When Astrid glanced in the direction the yell came from, he saw a giant minotaur covering his long banana infront of the audience.

[Waaa! I didn't want to be this big!]

"Your amazing! Be proud!" Mark said as he admired the show of power, or nudity the minotaur showed.

Crack! Crack!

Astrid looked at his egg to see that it was about to hatch.

Suddenly, a white cat crawled out, rolling around on the couch, scratching its head, with its blood red eyes and curious glances to the world, no one with the right mind would say its not cute!

[Im a fucking cat...]

=Cute?=

{HAHAHAHAHAHA! I was thinking you were gonna be a bitch, but your an pussy instead!}

-Hehe...-

"PFTTT! HAHAHHAHAH" Astrids was laughing so much he was rolling on the floor crying. He didn't realizes that the cat was about to jump onto him and scratch him.

[You son of a bitch!]

"Ow! I know I am one son of a bitch!" Astrid said out loud hugging the cat after it scratched him.

[Let me go!]

"Im, gonna torture you now!"

[NOOOO-]