War Queen

I like the writing style it's not something I would expect. There are only two chapters so far so I am not sure what to put for the updating stability. So far I am loving the story and the world background!

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE This novel has good world-building and concept! Good execution of the genre! With more fluidity, this novel will become superb! Nice grammar and has large amounts of vocabulary! I am jealous here! hehe ADVICE Fluidity, Sometimes it was stuttery when being read. I advise you to read the sentences aloud and see if to it if you are stuttering yourself. Well, I have the same problem! Hehe, Improve more and your future is assured!

The background of the story is interesting. I am writing this review at the beginning but I can tell that the story will be quite interesting. If you love historical myth, then this novel is for you.

it feels like a more African Greek Judeo-Christian mythological story. if you have any interest in any form of ancient Greek story I recommend this.

It's only a beggining but a very promising one. You have very descriptive writing style and rich language. I like how in the narration you paid attention to every detail. I really hope this book will only get more popular as you update new chapters

It's a very interesting fantasy novel with great world background and character design. The author is very creative with the gods' background stories and the flow kept me engaged all the time. The protagonist is quite cheeky, I like it. I also enjoyed the story development - good pacing. Not many chapters yet, but the story is intriguing and I like where it's going. More exciting adventures are awaiting Arthy and Nuala. I can feel it - it's gonna be good. Well done and looking forward to reading more! PS - I love Arthy's hair colour! It's so cool!

Wow! I really, really love your writing style and descriptions. I was really amazed at the character design of the gods and goddess in the first chapter. Some of their personalities were really unique and refreshing, like the fire goddess for example. As for the writing itself, wonderfully done! It's very beautiful, smooth, and easy to read with no major grammatical errors. Personally, I'm not really one for intense world building and description right off the bat, but I think you did well in not info dumping as much as other novels do in the first few chapters which is amazing! Overall, it was highly enjoyable. I really recommend it to anyone looking to read a high quality book! Awesome job author!!!

I love what I have read so far! Here's hoping the author keeps churning out this cracking yarn! This fictional world the author has created is truly something to behold and my words can't do it enough justice. The sheer scope and detail the author has gone into creating the world, characters and the numerous gods is amazing. Added to all this is the intriguing dilemma the protagonist is faced with. As a chosen one of humanity, she must discover why the gods have suddenly forsaken her world. The prose in this story flows flawlessly and is a pleasure to read, and each chapter develops the story nicely. I can't fault this one so far. Looking forward to seeing it develop further.

The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍

I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.

Narration was beautiful it really gives you're imagination a privilege to see throught the author's mind and the mythology depicted in story really gives a strong vibe that makes you feel connected overall a must read novel good job looking forward to another chapter.

Beautiful! The language here is great. This is easily one of the best written works I've seen on this website. Give it a try, and see for yourself what I mean!

I love the plot, I really do. I like how you describe each of the Gods and Goddesses traits, what do they do etc. The chapters were long so kudos to you Author for the effort. But There were all very long paragraphs which I recommend to you that you should cut them in half to make it much more better to read but overall it's good, deserves a five star. I'll definitely add this to my library!

This is a nice historical story. The synopsis is very interesting so it attracted my eyes. I came to take a look but I lost in it because of the plot. Well done writer! Keep it up! I appreciate you!