Ghost Rider Through the Multiverse

That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses

😑 Author promised a Mc that will be more like a solo person without other but then till the latest chapter he is just like any Trash Mc with luffy since ch 6. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😔😑😑🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined My dissapointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined

Complete disappointment after he joined the straw hats , he even told them his secret , who does that? and after being betrayed by a gold digger he goes into a relationship with nami and uses an op ability that costs him to revive her mother 😑

Most of those 5 Star Reviews is mostly Fake. Story sucks your Cliche Cringey Mc. Claims to make the character a solo adventure then proceeds to make him join a pirate group when he is the Ghost Rider.

Al primer capítulo me lo venía venir al segundo tenía ganas y al tercero lo dropeo con ganas el tema de los deseos es estúpido e inútil pero bueno el autor lo habrá escrito en el momento por aburrimiento

most of these 5 stars are fake guys, don't be fooled by the rating the story is very bland like food without salt. Just imagine the story is the same as the original except added some dialogue

Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update

Thank you!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Reveal Spoiler

Writing Quality: (4/5) Easy to read with little to no issue with the writing structure itself. Not perfect but still leagues ahead of many other novels. Stability of Updates: (5/5) I started reading when there were already a nice selection of chapters available, so I didn't really run into any update issues. Story Development: (1/5) Honestly, just read the One Piece manga and you'll know exactly what happens. I read up to ch 18 and nothing significant changes in the story. I mean, the MC does do some things that SHOULD make a big impact buuuut... nothing. Character Design: (1/5) The only true OC character is the MC and he feels like any other MC from the mass of other generic fanfics. I get that some events take place that make you want to care about him, but he just feels very.... boring, bland, edge lord almost in a way. Point is it's difficult to truly take him serious after a point. World Background: (5/5) I feel this one is kind of a cheap/cheat five out of five. While the novel doesn't feel like it fails at any world background connecting stuff, it also doesn't feel like it goes out of its way to actually try either. Summary: This feels like any other generic One Piece fanfic out there. The only thing the novel does is add in the MC to the One Piece crew and have the surrounding cast react to the MC's abilities or fall in love with him; all whilst following the original One Piece story line. To be fair though, the author does state that this novel is a wish fulfillment piece of work. Good overall for a first step into writing a fanfic; you got great writing punctuation and clean writing, so work and build off of that. As far as your next novels (or the next world for the MC if you want to go that route), just be more creative and be more willing to expand beyond the pre-established narrative of the source material. Be more courageous with just throwing your MC out there or something like that. Anyways, good job on your novel so far but I'll be waiting till it improves somewhat.

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Please more chapterss i need it hehe For my boredom and i like it if the mc is not always crazy or get insaned Good novel please keep up the good work

Reveal Spoiler