The Second Son Of Omniman

well this is sort of a spoiler if you havent read the comics of invincible but . . . . . . . . . . . . . . mark isnt omni mans only son when he left earth in the last episode he went to a planet and had a son with a alien woman

Child Mentality MC... but ok...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Most accurrate evaluation . I was unable to continue due to the bad writting and the lack of " immersion " . I felt like I was reading a coment of someone bored. I don't feel the sensation of seing it happen in front of me . Maybe other people might like it but I cannot continue.

I don't think I will be reading any more from this guy not just cause of this story cause it's actually alright but the way that this person handles things is horrible he can't take any kind of criticism or hate comments and when he gets he posts 4 times in a day ranting on how he will drop it Rating 2.8 stars

clearly i love it the writing is neat and concise the character development so far in two chapter is great im hoping it gets even better as you keep writing also just seeing where your going with it it has a lot of potential and im really enjoying it so much that i cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work

there is a omniman what else do you need? apdfjdsoslaoslldkfnfjgropapspzpzlxxcmcnnfnjfirospslzlzzlzlxcjgjfomsosndosnsdodnsodndodjdd

I appreciate your hard work that you are doing to produce a novel that we declare that we love, despite some of the critics who do not concern you with them. Do your work and I advised you to focus on two novels and add a lot of incidents instead of rushing and delving into one chapter by making it rich in words with me following from (Morocco).

The author is improving his writing it seems which is ok. The only problem I have is in the early chaps when the Trauma the MC supposedly had has no explaination. Not to mention the way he loves his father was getting a little creepy at first. Overall it could be better but still a good read imo.

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I've only seen the invincible series and did some research ... 1. the writing is pretty bad but can be fixed 2. the first chapter is a bit confusing 3. the scenarios are not well planned (the mc will be a "loyal" viltrumite ? "

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