An Extraordinary Gentleman
From the year 2020, a series of cataclysmic events transpired on Earth. Starting with a deadly virus, Earth got affected with earthquakes, tsunamis, drought and famine and because of an unknown phenomenon, some humans and animals alike received superpowers and turned them into superhumans and beasts.
Humans became one and constructed strongholds to protect themselves from these mutated animals and beasts. Though the peace restored in the strongholds, an underlying current is forming that can break this peace.
Join the young heir of the Marchetti mafia family in his journey of revenge and his rise to power in the soon to be shattered humanity.
Psst... There will be a major twist around chapter 15 to 20. So I really hope you guys can wait and see it. I am mentioning this here because the beginning will be little bland.
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The synopsis is very brief because I don't want to reveal the further story. At the beginning there will be less Sci-fi elements but I will integrate it in the plot. I am writing this for the WPC 182 and I am also parallel writing my other book “Unlimited Borrowing System” for spirity. But don’t worry, the quality of both books will not be affected.
If AEG gets an award in this WPC, I will serialize it with a minimum 7 chapters per week with occasional mass releases. So your support will be a great motivation. Hope you will enjoy it.
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Hey this is author here obviously giving myself a 5-star review. I have the concept in my mind for long time and this WPC gave me the boost to turn into the book. I hope everyone enjoys it and please let me know what you think in comments. Your support is the motivation for us authors!!!
Okay! First things first the background is interesting. I usually do not like long-ass explanatory opening but that one picked my interest. There are a lot of good things here. But, as in every book, there are issues. 1) That's a personal thought but I needed to say it, perfect type mcs kind of bore me. I've read too many of those these days and I need something refreshing. As I said, I'm only speaking for myself, although other readers might share my opinion. 2) That's the main issue. There is a mix of the past and present tense in your chaps. Here's my advice, stick to one tense. Apart from dialogs, descriptions should be either present tense or past tense only. It truly is confusing to read two tenses in one sentence. Usually, for various reasons, past tense is the way to go. Tho I got it that you might have wanted to differ your introductory story parts to the actual story. Still, check it out. It truly hinders your work, which is a pity. It has potential but that issue only cages it. Anyway, overall it's a good job. Keep it up! Y.R.
This book is interesting. I rarely read any mafia story before, but I can definitely tell this story will be great in the future. The world is well built and the characters are definitely interesting. Worth check it out.
Not really into Sci-fi but this definitely has potential. I can tell the author has a vast imagination that they didn’t fail to bring their readers into. There are few errors that can easily be fixed. You did a good job, author🤗🤗🤗.
I'm quite not into sci-fi, but the story background and the language really kept me going. The main character is really unique with many things mixed up. Hoping for more chapters!!! All the best with your book[img=recommend]
intriguing plot? check unique main character? double check writing style? triple check check check big thumbs up to you dear author for creating such vivid novel! your writing style is very easy to read with very minimal flaws to punctuation. keep writing and i hope ur novels be successful💖
Interesting book❤❤❤ wonderful plotline💜💜💜 well planned characters and plot🥰🥰🥰 lots of support author🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 recommended for everyone to read it💜💜💜
I like the post-apocalyptic theme and the author seems to have a solid layout of the world he/she wants to build. The only thing that breaks the immersion is the occasional grammatical hiccups, most of which are typos (I think), its an interesting idea so I hope to see more.
Ok, so the first thing that attract me here is the world building. It is really detailed, descriptive and obtain many informations! One can easily see that the author put a lot of effort in this world background! Good job author! At first I was thinking that MC has little presence but you said it is intentional so will be waiting for more developments!!
I really like stories that take place in a twisted/apocalyptic world. The way the novel describes the different factions and how they work with one another is very interesting. The only flaws I've found were some sentences feeling like they needed an extra word in it but other than that, it's a well made novel. Keep it up!
Really great and polished writing and the subject matter is very grand and epic. The classic superhero/mafia/political drama around a future that we have not seen yet. Holds a lots of potential and cannot wait to see where the story goes. This will remain in my library. Thank you so much, author!
Undoubtedly one of the most interesting plot and story for a novel. i am really impressed by the way you described the background of the novel. Good job mate
I'm not exactly into the sci-fi genre, but this one is really unique and it gave me a different kind of vibe. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work, author!
This world theme is something that attracts me a lot, with the little that was revealed about the level of supers, level of monsters, along with another 'mafia' theme that I also like, made me very interested in your novel . It is something that I intend to follow. Thanks for writing!
This is a well-thought-out world that holds a lot of promise. The writing could stand to be tightened up, as there are tense issues and other grammer issues. But the story is there and it will be interesting to see where it leads.