[THIS IS NOW MY ORIGINAL STORY]
Shi Xei(Mei) is an idiot that had been dumb by his girlfriend for money and also dou to that he wants to be an immortal but the reality is too sh*t. One night while he is doing a multitasking reading while playing a cultivation game a lightning struck accurately in his room 9 time and our mc think that he will become an immortal so he face the last lightning strike unluckily he died a virgin.
[EXPECT THE WRONG GRAMMAR ENGLISH IS NOT MY MAIN LANGUAGE I DON'T REALLY NEED POWER STONE I JUST WRITE FOR FUN SHARING MY WORK]
Hahaha, woah totally unique. I'll be waiting for your next chapter, the words you use was also made in modern and the naruto system in the cultivation world. i'm excited how the story goes. Keep it up 😊😊😊
I like this kind of story its good story and i can imagine the ninja world just as like in wuxia world which is i find it strange why i imagine chinese person wearing hanfu with naruto background village haha however this is a good work keep going on!!
a unique cliche story lol the author takes a very modern perspective of a reincarnatee , the comedy is good and i hope the story plays smoothly ![img=update]