Even if I am an Ugly Bastard I want to be a good person (English)

They expected a shameless review from Author-sama, BUT IT WAS ME, DIO! I would like to be Dio :'c but without the homosexual part ... Anyway, I hope you enjoy my attempt at an erotic novel ~ A hug <3

The rating is kinda inflated since there's this one guy that keeps giving 5 star comments. Author should put up a drama tag or other tags that accurately sum up this fic because it's misleading. Tone down on the angst it's extremely unnecessary in my opinion. Because mc is the current owner of the body and not the previous person, so it makes no sense for mc to freak out and think he did something he actually didn't do. I think you should try to replicate the moments he spent with the lolis in the way you write his interaction with the older women because those interactions feel off. Instead of giving him caliginephobia or whatever you could have given him trust issues much simpler to write about than what you chose. The villain group was unnecessary. Since its a problem easily solved mc's precious self is unwittingly the founder and it's not like he's poor he's extremely rich and has ninjas and whatnot working under him. wiping them out is easy but then he realizes other people would just take their place so his hero complex caused by guilt so he decides to make his own organization. fits perfectly with the organized crime tag and you can use it to branch into a kengan storyline if you want. Make the system decent it's quite bad and the cancer if you fail a mission is not funny. started ok but lost me halfway

Sure the MC had a horrible life but after reincarnation HE HAD A SYSTEM so he could have grown a spine but he gets some fear of beutiful girls which is total bu**sh*t like you fear girls or you dont just get it over with because honestly this would be the best story about a guy who got betrayed so he loses faith in humanity or something,.

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The story isn't bad, it just the MC that too hateful for me. actually i want to give 1 stars because of mc character. I know that I'm only read this ff until 11 chapter, but there's no growth but down grade in mc chara. Too much dramas, inner conflict, emotional and anger disorder, maybe coward and stupid and many more negative characteristics. There's "COMEDY" TAG, but in 11 chapter there's no comedy but full of drama. Maybe Author thinks that MC need solid and cruel background, but keeping add dramas one after another and add mental breakdown isn't my favorite. So instead comedy, add "DRAMA" in your tag.

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This story is depressing, the MC is dumb, indecisive, has strong indications of multiple personality, none of them decent, intelligent or charismatic, has nothing that brings the slightest support or emotional connection with this MC, you just follow the story as a single, waiting for the MC to improve or start making smart decisions, but he just follows the less logical and more difficult choices just to not take 1 step forward soon because "they'll notice" or "I regret doing things that it wasn't me who did it and I don't have any memories".

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Things drag on sooo much. The protagonist keeps having the same monologues every chapter. The idea is not bad, the execution is choppy though. The protagonist has no agency, and basically acts as the plot demands, or gets dragged by it.

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It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story

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