Reborb To Kill (DXD)

-I always put 5 stars since it is not easy to create a story, be it good or bad, I only put less when they put genres that do not appear in the synopsis or when they do not warn and then you read things that you do not want and did not expect. -It is a good start for the story, you just have to correct grammar mistakes, there are times when the name is not correct, "he and she", they change places. - If you only correct and put the names correctly it would be more understandable for the rest, since I can read normal, because I am used to reading worse grammar, but history always compensates it. - If you have time, look for a proofreader or use grammar, which is free, but if your story is good. - good start of the harem with "grayfia". - Then you can continue with yasaka, since it is a yokai, then tiamat, later "gabriel", then laviana reni, and more mature girls that are not used much, I like how you changed to koneko, and not to mention that can have a both kittens xD. -and finally I liked that you did not do the same as many authors who help Issei, since he is his brother, those "fanfic" whether yuri, harem or no harem, they always do it and the story gets boring, it's Better to let him go on his way, in the end he has the plot armor so that he survives (just match Issei with Irina or Asia, don't give him a harem, otherwise you would also have to be putting another "pov" from his brother) , and I can only say that you keep more chapters and improve your grammar.

A great story! a nice start, doesnt know what dxd is that makes it more interesting... He joined a peerage... He became a slave... Book removed from library. I wann give it a lower rating but your writing isnt bad. you just chose to kill an amazing concept in chapter two then shot it dead in chapter 4.

Now why would Inot give my self a 5 star rating. Well my gramer and spelling leaves something to be desired. He joined a peerage and even I hate my self for that. Just I feel like maybe this needs a rewrite.

Liking it so far only problem i had was the way he was with issei i mean i dont care for issei that much but he was his brother so it was a little much like the way there making progress though pretty good fanfic so far hope you keep it up.

Its a really fun read, the characters are nice, the MC feels like a person, the powers are awesome and Grayfia is single! Also the interractions with Koneko are kawaiii altogether its fun and wholesome!!

Ótima história, muito original esta cheia de ideias muito boas gostei muito dos poderes do MC, bom trabalho continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can someone please make an update!! I absolutely love his bloodline it fits him so well I hope him and his brother have a rivalry to see who gets the strongest!! I am so up for that. sibling rivalry is the best

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Been really enjoying this fanfic, hoping you are just writing up bew chapters and not having any real life troubles, Please keep updating, You dont get alot of good dxd fanfics these days, keep up the good work 👍🏻👌🏼

I have been really enjoying this book soo far I actually thought it was cool that he had joined Grafias peerage and not Rias's bc that's everyone else has them join rias plus I love Grafia!! I really do hope you continue this and finish it because I have been enjoying it alot!!

I’d give a story 5 stars just for a good mc and plot. What people forget is that most authors who write fics aren’t Pros. Feedback is good and all but giving the story a low rating just because of one part makes zero sense to me. Reviews should be given on an overall basis. For me like I said, I like antihero and plot. I don’t care much about grammar as long as its understandable. Character Development takes some chapters to be fully seen but so far so good.

5 stars out of respect for the author who posted a notice that the mc would join a peerage right in the synopsis. I hate to have mc joining a peerage because it feels like slavery (and I'm sick of mcs becoming a demon). But I understand that this is a matter of personal taste and I respect the author for also understanding this and posting a warning knowing that many are like me and don't like it.

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