Unfamiliar Cats
Author: predaniels33
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He was a king without a kingdom
Cursed to live in torment for hundred of years with men.
And to walk among the fallen gods.
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" it makes no sense Amelia" I murmured looking back to where Lord Cadil laid oozing in the sunlight. "The curse should be intact but he isn't what he seems to be " .
"And how do you know that Aellia, you might have well had been staring at him the whole time we've been....
" I didn't" I cut in readily, discouraging the idea from forming in her head. .
Lord Cadil might be cursed but he wasn't weak.
"How would you know that" Amelia asked her eyes going from Lord Cadil to mine.
"I battled him"
The quiet gasp Amelia withdrew was enough to remind me that I had lost my mind.
"He won".
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Interesting premise. The writing style is fluid and decent and the command of English is good; however, there are typo's here and there: misplaced quotation marks, his-her pronoun switch, tense switch, capitalization, but overall fantastic. Keep up the good work Author.
Hey man! This is an honest review please take a reflection. I found your novel has a lot of potentials "but" careful with the writing quality and the structure of grammar. You can enhance it, whatever you want to do. Good luck!
Good story and great writing style. Though if you be a bit more careful about the sentence structures and grammar, it will get better. Otherwise, good work!