Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
An obese Otaku died....
He received a system....
His wish was to travel all the anime, novel and fanfiction world....
First World:-
1st- One Piece
2nd- Yet to decide....
Notice:-
1st- Mc is a bit op....
2nd- Harem is a must fact....
3rd- May be contain some sex scenes.....
4th- He will travel different worlds with different powers and looks....
So read this on your own violation.
Warning:--
1st- My writing ability is not that good but i will try my best...
2nd- English is also somewhat not good...
3rd- Character development is a foreign term for me.....
4th- I will delete all those crappy negative reviews....
Now let me tell you all, before you start reading if you are expecting a marvelous plot then get the fuc* off.
I will write this as my liking.
SUB-TAGS:-
Harem Seeking Protagonist, Ruthless MC, Se*,
Overpowered MC, Mature, Violence
THOSE WHO DON'T LIKE OP CHARACTERS, HAREM, SYSTEM ETC. DON'T READ THIS. THIS FANFIC IS NOT FOR YOU.
THE COVER IS NOT MINE AND ALL THE CHARACTERS AND POWERS WERE ALSO DERIVED FORM VARIOUS ANIMES.
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ - not really 4, but I will give 4☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆○○ - too fast. the lack of context makes the story boring. ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - huge disappointment on the character Design. the mc was reincarnated as Luffy, because of the system he end up looking like Madara. - so the mc's name is luffy with madara's body who can transform into a dragon(sigh) + 5 elements. (you could have at least change his name or just make an oc mc, but no imma be luffy and the same time looks like madara) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《Overall 3.2》
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A very good novel. And Author has kept it interesting so far. Which is what some novels are unable to do. For now the world is one piece. And it’s been written well.
It's just your average wishes/reincarnation novel nothing special.
This story bland and boring The MC is a arrogant young master beta male virgin character type, those should never be mixed together let alone be a MC. .........i could probably type a lot more but these are the major problems with this book and i don’t want to waste anymore time on this, it’s just not worth it.
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I don't give many harsh ratings but I will give to this book. Mc is what u will call a young master type mc who likes to be toxic and loves collecting girls... He is luffy but with Madara's body, Author could have just made him an Oc but no he soes not eant to create his own plot so makes him luffy. This in other words is a typical fan-fic of this site which is not worth reading in my opinion.
I feel that many times the ones that give 5 stars are multi-accounts or bots... ...........................................................................
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Author that falsify their novel rating are a scum. Also the novel is probably dropped since there is no update for almost a month. I dont get how people write novel and then drop it without noticing their reader.
Good story bro. Also thanks for frequent updates.... Sorry you got to deal with Haters that sucks mayne. Haters gun hate. Thanks for the story tho
only read if you are ok with following: inconsistancy, disrespecting cool characters, stupidity and calling a gun a sword and claim it to be swordsmanship ...
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