Undead Nation

i like the unique tragedy that you put in your story but, I don't like the way you put the place name and date. in my opinion you should put that naturally like this : Unknown Place, New Delhi, India Saturday, August 27th, 2021 and you should have a little work on dialogues? It's better when you put them into sentences. But overall it's good. (it's my opinion)

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my goodness such a unique tragic history is turned by author to a lavish writing. I believe the author is gonna make it a beautiful scenario. The bg,plot is kinda interesting ngl. Best of luck to author!! Hope this work gets the best recognition it deserves.[img=recommend]

Hey guys it's the author I know it's been a long time since I have posted any update on both of my novels. Actually, I was busy with my exams. I apologize to all of my readers but I promise now you will be getting regular updates.

This really does seem like an interesting story but I find it just difficult to read it when it looks like a script for a play. If not for that I would've given it 5 stars.

This story is Really amazing! The Writing is unique But it would be better to put the dialogues in another way and the actions made by the characters. Mc is really strong and im glad. His living urge is good too. Keep it up👏🤛good job