Hello Everyone, I am Abhirav
The author of this book. I hope you all are fine.
OJAS KSHUDHA : POWER HUNGRY is a story about a boy who bullied by other Rangers because he is lowest rank ranger in entire ranger history. but one day....(read ch-1)
I know it sounds very typical but trust me. My story is not any typical story. I suggest you. You should read atleast 5-10 Chapters before dropping or judging my story.
You will find it very interesting, believe it.
by the way english is not my native language, also I am not very good in English, and I ameture writer so my writing skills are not very good but I will improve with time.
I hope you will give my story a try, If you are already reading than don't forget to give your feedback and if you are already dropped my book than also give your feedback about why you dropped it.
by the way, I am writing this story because I like this Genre very much. My inspiration is Solo Leveling, Omniscient Reader's viewpoint and Second Life Ranker. My story is different from them but few Concepts are same.
Thank you everyone for your precious time.
4 years ago
9
Akash1111112
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4 years ago
9
Yusuke_0
New on Webnovel, found your Novel and liked it but I have one request please try to upload fast. I very excited for next chapter. Please Reply me... Don't forget me when your novel get famous 😂😂
Don't worry bro... You are ameture writer so, you will learn. You have to focus on your grammar and Vocabulary.
4 years ago
9
Nick_News_7299
Just started reading this novel and so far its been great I enjoy seeing fast growth. Only problem is 1 chapter per week but I’m sure you have other things going on but keep consistency and you’ll be good
4 years ago
9
Andrew_Brown23
Enjoying this ameture author's novel! MC of this novel is different from other system manhwa/novel's MC, and I like him because he never gave up Dattebayo. I wanna see improvement in writing. It's hard to imagine scenarios because you didn't described anything properly but don't get demotivate, it's just a start.
4 years ago
9
Park657
I readed many System manhwa, manhua or novels but I am interested in this also.
I know chapter 1 is very typical but we should not judge a book by only it's first chapter. I will wait for other chapters.
Let's see what happens next.....
4 years ago
9
Vinit_Tayal
Great! Story have potential. Simple English is used... Easy to understand for non-native English speakers. First chapter is so awesome, I read solo leveling and I love that, your story is also giving solo leveling vibes but it's different. Don't forget about me when your story gets popular. By the way Can't wait for second chapter.
4 years ago
9
Luffy_the_pirate
Now, Tower is going to tremble. Our MC, Abhirav, A human beast is going to enter floor 1
I dunno but but, I loving this novel so much.
Thank you for this book
I know your writing is not good but you will improve.
NOW, ONLY FOCUS ON STORY.
4 years ago
6
Ankit_Mishra17
hmmm, first of all, you've done a great job at writing, but you should add more details about characters such as there looks, costumes etc... also I noticed a thing, that by the start of story even he was weak yet confident that's why he screamed such nonsense like "I'm going to be strongest , blah blah" but whenever he saw himself in agony, he lost all his confidence like "I'm going to die... blah blah" I think only this was the weak, which can be fixed.
overall, I enjoyed it. 😊
Hello Everyone, I am Abhirav The author of this book. I hope you all are fine. OJAS KSHUDHA : POWER HUNGRY is a story about a boy who bullied by other Rangers because he is lowest rank ranger in entire ranger history. but one day....(read ch-1) I know it sounds very typical but trust me. My story is not any typical story. I suggest you. You should read atleast 5-10 Chapters before dropping or judging my story. You will find it very interesting, believe it. by the way english is not my native language, also I am not very good in English, and I ameture writer so my writing skills are not very good but I will improve with time. I hope you will give my story a try, If you are already reading than don't forget to give your feedback and if you are already dropped my book than also give your feedback about why you dropped it. by the way, I am writing this story because I like this Genre very much. My inspiration is Solo Leveling, Omniscient Reader's viewpoint and Second Life Ranker. My story is different from them but few Concepts are same. Thank you everyone for your precious time.
Reveal Spoiler
New on Webnovel, found your Novel and liked it but I have one request please try to upload fast. I very excited for next chapter. Please Reply me... Don't forget me when your novel get famous 😂😂 Don't worry bro... You are ameture writer so, you will learn. You have to focus on your grammar and Vocabulary.
Just started reading this novel and so far its been great I enjoy seeing fast growth. Only problem is 1 chapter per week but I’m sure you have other things going on but keep consistency and you’ll be good
Enjoying this ameture author's novel! MC of this novel is different from other system manhwa/novel's MC, and I like him because he never gave up Dattebayo. I wanna see improvement in writing. It's hard to imagine scenarios because you didn't described anything properly but don't get demotivate, it's just a start.
I readed many System manhwa, manhua or novels but I am interested in this also. I know chapter 1 is very typical but we should not judge a book by only it's first chapter. I will wait for other chapters. Let's see what happens next.....
Great! Story have potential. Simple English is used... Easy to understand for non-native English speakers. First chapter is so awesome, I read solo leveling and I love that, your story is also giving solo leveling vibes but it's different. Don't forget about me when your story gets popular. By the way Can't wait for second chapter.
Now, Tower is going to tremble. Our MC, Abhirav, A human beast is going to enter floor 1 I dunno but but, I loving this novel so much. Thank you for this book I know your writing is not good but you will improve. NOW, ONLY FOCUS ON STORY.
hmmm, first of all, you've done a great job at writing, but you should add more details about characters such as there looks, costumes etc... also I noticed a thing, that by the start of story even he was weak yet confident that's why he screamed such nonsense like "I'm going to be strongest , blah blah" but whenever he saw himself in agony, he lost all his confidence like "I'm going to die... blah blah" I think only this was the weak, which can be fixed. overall, I enjoyed it. 😊