The story is the best it as a nice future and this is the author first time making a story [img=update]
4 years ago
4
PABELO
sorry man but your work has a lot for you to fix and very very short
4 years ago
5
PABELO
your chapters are much much shorter, make more chapters longer to have better stories
4 years ago
1
SOMMO_ARCANO
chapters vary from long and short, little dialogue and hardly any interaction, author keeps putting photos and does not comment or describe on how structures are made
The story is the best it as a nice future and this is the author first time making a story [img=update]
sorry man but your work has a lot for you to fix and very very short
your chapters are much much shorter, make more chapters longer to have better stories
chapters vary from long and short, little dialogue and hardly any interaction, author keeps putting photos and does not comment or describe on how structures are made