NEXUS
In a different universe, after the collision of three galaxies, Nexus, a space linking planets appeared. A great war between the inhabitants of each galaxy erupted for supremacy and continued for hundreds of years,3 mysterious beings appeared and stopped the war, leaving behind a system called Pandora. After a thousand years, Nexus is now a home for different species in pursuit of power, fame, and knowledge. The story follows a half-human boy named Alex with a great sense of adventure but who is also looking for answers about his origin, his only lead is a mysterious key and his unique power of creation.
NOTE: the pace is a little slow and my writing techniques are still lacking, but I promise that it will get better.
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Art not mine
artist: Nimarra
The story is promising but i'm starting to lose interest here.A mass release is the best option to handle a slow start ,we all want a good story but what is more important is one with stable updates , the only thing keeping me from dropping is the long chapters, even with the poor grammar the story is still enjoyable ; nothing that can't be fixed with a decent editor.
WOW i wonder how the story will unfold,with multipiles species ,it better have some unique design and new races not only those that we already used to.The killer whale grabbed my attention , let'd see what kind of unique power they will have
I feel like the author could had started with the MC as a ranker or climber ,then used those 4 chapter as a flashback.But then again i can feel that he is trying to built his world then start with the real story .Many majors forces were introducted like the empire , the bureau, and the moonlight company i wish that the author will take advantage of them as the story progress.
Sound good. I just hope that it don't turn into a cliche .The next chapter better give the MC a purpuse since the summury say that he is lokking for answers.Other than that ,Babylon have a lot to offer so I hope the fights will be good.
The world building seem to be unique, some grammar problems ,but I'm not a english native so as long as it's understandable I'm okay.I hope the part were the MC start the tests begin soon .
Just one chapter available , but i think it a good start the world building is creative and have room for expantion .The dynamic beetween character is also good you can feel their emotion ,although the author should put more work into the phrasing and some of the diologues between character .