Hi, I'm not that good with review so I will just what I thing about it.
I really like it, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it goes well on your side author.
4 years ago
1
Tyyx
I don't have a well-formed opinion for the play yet, but I have a general idea of what I might encounter.
In general terms what stands out the most is the character design, you can see that they were thought beforehand to make them more realistic but it remains to see the development they have regarding their actions and their ambitions.
The writing quality is good, I can understand everything well although sometimes there are small words that could be changed for others, or rewrite sentences, to make the reading more fluid. But you can see the author's commitment to write something with quality. Good job!
The world background has not been explained but some things are assumed in iceberg fashion. As the name suggests, "Urban Emperor". You know what might be there.
Without further ado I will wait for other chapters to do another review, but I don't go away disappointed with another poor quality new work. It has the potential to be a lot of fun.
I just hope for two things:
Firstly that there is no nasty NTR towards the protagonist. I'll never understand masochistic horn-loving authors, but to each his own. I'll just leave with a bad taste in my mouth.
Long live the Mary Sue MCs who take the beauties!
And secondly, may the MC not be a freaking hypocrite. If he's evil let him behave like one. If he's a "nice guy" let him be as such, and even if he's a middle ground. To each his own nature in his actions. But I can't stand the implausible twists of hypocritical protagonists.
4 years ago
4
Aeser
Hello I have been looking for a novel like this for a long time already and I finally found it.
MC is strong but not too op
MC is normal and not some superhero
MC is building an organization and I love how he is going to build a gang
It is modern and has a cool mc where he does evill stuff but still has his own limits.
The characters reactions feel alive
The pill he had others take was fine but I think it was too much of him to use it on almost everyone(current chapters and it is only a personal opinion cause I also understand the reason he did it)
A negative part of the novel is the lack of more chaptersssss as what always happens in the novels I love. I speedrun it and bam im in the last chap and has to wait for a day.
So.... I dont really write reviews cause it takes too long but I love this and thanks for the author plus sorry for the messy review lol.
3 years ago
2
MmMAaaSsSTeerr
hello author I still didn't read this but I see some positive review in this novel so gonna give this a 5/5 and gonna try this one if it's worth it best you luck author 😎
3 years ago
1
Marius_Ion
Good grammar, characters with common sense something rare nowdays and an anti hero MC Worth the time spent reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
3 years ago
1
Darius_Carol
Cultivation + Modern Setting, something rare, done more than just well.
No comments regarding grammar, with an anti hero MC that actually has common sense. Worth the time spent reading.
3 years ago
1
Cornel_Pop
Cultivation + Modern Setting, something rare, done more than just well.
No comments regarding grammar. With an anti hero MC that actually has common sense.
3 years ago
1
lag_king
let me say this one last time i am sorry for everything i said everything i did and now that you have 10 reviews i hope you continue for the people that have and will enjoy this story in the future
4 years ago
1
TheInsanekid
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves
4 years ago
1
MonarchOfSilence
I must say that I have been searching for a good novel combining the Modern Day world with Cultivation, they are rare and most that I found are sub par, but this one, well it's good.
PROs:
- A badass MC(I had enough of MC's that are cringe and unlikable or having to wait for character development, I prefer to hear the MC's story piece by piece) Check,
- Cultivation in a modern world Check,
- Harem that for many will be a turnoff, but I am fine with or without so Check
- Good grammar, I don't have to stop to reread to understand what happens, with mistakes like a character's name in another place, that have no effect on the overall novel.
CONs:
- The world building can be worked on, until now we don't know too much about the overall world also how chi made it's way in the world or if was there since the immemorial.
- For people that don't like Harems, I don't think it's for you, even if it's well done.
Overall: A good read.
4 years ago
1
fat_guy
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
4 years ago
0
insane_guy_5023
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
4 years ago
0
H20nash999
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
4 years ago
0
TheGlitchKing
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
4 years ago
0
God_Slayer_0628
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
Hi, I'm not that good with review so I will just what I thing about it. I really like it, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it goes well on your side author.
I don't have a well-formed opinion for the play yet, but I have a general idea of what I might encounter. In general terms what stands out the most is the character design, you can see that they were thought beforehand to make them more realistic but it remains to see the development they have regarding their actions and their ambitions. The writing quality is good, I can understand everything well although sometimes there are small words that could be changed for others, or rewrite sentences, to make the reading more fluid. But you can see the author's commitment to write something with quality. Good job! The world background has not been explained but some things are assumed in iceberg fashion. As the name suggests, "Urban Emperor". You know what might be there. Without further ado I will wait for other chapters to do another review, but I don't go away disappointed with another poor quality new work. It has the potential to be a lot of fun. I just hope for two things: Firstly that there is no nasty NTR towards the protagonist. I'll never understand masochistic horn-loving authors, but to each his own. I'll just leave with a bad taste in my mouth. Long live the Mary Sue MCs who take the beauties! And secondly, may the MC not be a freaking hypocrite. If he's evil let him behave like one. If he's a "nice guy" let him be as such, and even if he's a middle ground. To each his own nature in his actions. But I can't stand the implausible twists of hypocritical protagonists.
Hello I have been looking for a novel like this for a long time already and I finally found it. MC is strong but not too op MC is normal and not some superhero MC is building an organization and I love how he is going to build a gang It is modern and has a cool mc where he does evill stuff but still has his own limits. The characters reactions feel alive The pill he had others take was fine but I think it was too much of him to use it on almost everyone(current chapters and it is only a personal opinion cause I also understand the reason he did it) A negative part of the novel is the lack of more chaptersssss as what always happens in the novels I love. I speedrun it and bam im in the last chap and has to wait for a day. So.... I dont really write reviews cause it takes too long but I love this and thanks for the author plus sorry for the messy review lol.
hello author I still didn't read this but I see some positive review in this novel so gonna give this a 5/5 and gonna try this one if it's worth it best you luck author 😎
Good grammar, characters with common sense something rare nowdays and an anti hero MC Worth the time spent reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Cultivation + Modern Setting, something rare, done more than just well. No comments regarding grammar, with an anti hero MC that actually has common sense. Worth the time spent reading.
Cultivation + Modern Setting, something rare, done more than just well. No comments regarding grammar. With an anti hero MC that actually has common sense.
let me say this one last time i am sorry for everything i said everything i did and now that you have 10 reviews i hope you continue for the people that have and will enjoy this story in the future
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves
I must say that I have been searching for a good novel combining the Modern Day world with Cultivation, they are rare and most that I found are sub par, but this one, well it's good. PROs: - A badass MC(I had enough of MC's that are cringe and unlikable or having to wait for character development, I prefer to hear the MC's story piece by piece) Check, - Cultivation in a modern world Check, - Harem that for many will be a turnoff, but I am fine with or without so Check - Good grammar, I don't have to stop to reread to understand what happens, with mistakes like a character's name in another place, that have no effect on the overall novel. CONs: - The world building can be worked on, until now we don't know too much about the overall world also how chi made it's way in the world or if was there since the immemorial. - For people that don't like Harems, I don't think it's for you, even if it's well done. Overall: A good read.
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)