writing was good .it pleses my mind it's kind of comedy.overall best.Plese make more chapters as soon as possible I am looking forward for your writing.
4 years ago
7
_reki
Your writing is pretty good ,
Awaiting for next chapters .
You made the character kind a op from brain which took my interest in it .
Conclusion was good for Ch 1
4 years ago
7
_Senua
Good one man ,the story is nice and the characters are pretty interesting
I like your story, awaiting for your next chapter and the writings good as well .
4 years ago
6
_Shal
Nice one man.
When is the next chapter coming.
Story is good ,I freaking liked oji
from your story,he is a funny one .
You have my full support.
4 years ago
4
_John
It was great to read.Story is amazing.
Making a service club was a great idea Oji is one I like the most .He is more cheerful.
Awaiting your next chapter.
4 years ago
3
My_teen_Comedy
Nice one keep it up awaiting next issue
ch two was good . Writing is awesome.
Story has a nice catch with reality .
Want the conclusion at ch 4.
writing was good .it pleses my mind it's kind of comedy.overall best.Plese make more chapters as soon as possible I am looking forward for your writing.
Your writing is pretty good , Awaiting for next chapters . You made the character kind a op from brain which took my interest in it . Conclusion was good for Ch 1
Good one man ,the story is nice and the characters are pretty interesting I like your story, awaiting for your next chapter and the writings good as well .
Nice one man. When is the next chapter coming. Story is good ,I freaking liked oji from your story,he is a funny one . You have my full support.
It was great to read.Story is amazing. Making a service club was a great idea Oji is one I like the most .He is more cheerful. Awaiting your next chapter.
Nice one keep it up awaiting next issue ch two was good . Writing is awesome. Story has a nice catch with reality . Want the conclusion at ch 4.