Douluo Dalu 1 : Fire And Lightning

I wrote this fanfiction for fun. If you don't like the story, please don't read it. There are many other Douluo Dalu fanfiction stories that you can read on webnovels. Dear readers, thank you for coming and reading my story.

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Well, this is to qualify the story and well I will say that it is good, since I had read its previous version and I will say that the author will know how to handle the story well, but I will leave my vote at 3 because I actually liked the previous version much more, MC's wife disappeared or at least I didn't see her appear when they deverian in the previous version and honestly only that change made it impossible for me to continue reading, I take away something that I liked to read previously, so in summary, it is a good story if You didn't read the previous version, but for me, I won't start reading it.

There's a few things I can say about this story but overall, I would recommend it. The grammar could use some work as the author has spelling mistakes, uses commas instead of periods, and they often use the wrong form when using gender words (uses grandson when describing a female or using him/his when talking about a female character) The rankings can also get confusing because it's not the rankings used in the novel/manhua (Spirit Saint = Soul Sect?) Story development is very copy paste in the first few chapters when the MC is training and he does get OP within those chapters but it's with DD4 in mind. Stability is great! As is story development and character design. Not much world building done yet though but I look forward to it.

This is a good story to read, just a bit of a warning, this fic is following the naming of the animated version, so it may be a little bit confusing for manhua readers.

Please the don’t Drop the story just got up to the latest chapter hope for more to come 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

I’m reluctant to write anything, but the story is good........................................................................................................................

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bro its been a year and please comeback 🙏

I hope you update more often ,.....................................................................................................................,...........