Naruto :Madam, You Don’t Want Anything To Happen To Sasuke, Right?

If possible make all the girls in the series later on in the harem be Virgins,it will take your novel up a notch.

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Прошу прощения за невежество но не могли бы вы сделать рекламу короче в главах а самих глав длиннее если честно это вообще не несколько предложений что очень расстраивает а график выхода застопорилась ещё раз извините

To be brutally honest. This story is weak in too many ways. The author exclaims that they want to rise in the rankings, but look at the mc, I could care less at this point if he gets stronger or fails miserably. Nothing makes me want to root for him. Each chapter is about 1k words,and I bet only 300 of them are actual content in every chapter. This is what I would call a 100 ft/34 m story. Looks good from afar, but once you get close, you see a lot of things wrong with it.

2|5|1|1|2 Translation is decent, but no amount of editing or better tl is gonna fix this. og author probably doesn't know much abt the canon, feels like sm Pantser writer held against his will using just the wiki and cliche fanfic tropes. XD Read the mtl up to 200, it's c.rap, even for a cn fic, it's bad. This type of sht getting powerstones/readers is just baffling...and authors begging for powerstones/collection from early chapters/ (who tf even does that XD) , not even original works do that, half the chapter is basically an ad...

bad a work of naruto that is a translation, for those who are fans of the anime naruto must be sad seeing that on this site there are only low quality translated fanfic, this story is just more garbage, in the first chapter the author does not even describe the appearance of the protagonist, nor is his origin explored, the MC is like an npc

its horrible anytime the Mc gets a power up the author seems to forget that the mc is supposed to be trying to hide and wait until the day of the massacre and the mc is always confused about why him showing off his powers makes more people pay attention to him

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21 chapters in , I must say it's well written. The writing has this pace that's not too fast or too slow for a fanfic, and the character design is well developed. For the simulation part it's just right without unnecessary details and has this depth that's just flows with it. The world background needs a little work but we're in early stages so I think it's nice as it is now. So I would suggest give it a read and we'll see how it goes........

Хорошо! Это действительно хорошо. Отличное развитие персонажей, сюжет. Интересный главный герой, хорошо написанный фанфик. Один из лучших фанфиков.🔥🔥🔥🔥

mc has wood release,otusuki physique,mangekyo sharingan,but he still can't beat Itachi. And that is after countless simulations in 3 days. he still get tired and can't understand the logic of butterfly effect, doesn't know clearly about plot, basic plot error.

I don’t understand about the hate, this is actually decent compared to other naruto fanfiction out there everything is overused 🔝🔝🔝🔝🔝🔝

This a good story and the translation is fine the character have a good development i hope you don't drop it and update more often thank you 🥰🥰🥰

Muy bueno hasta ahora , aunque no me decido cuál prefiero, si está o la de kurama. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]