Reincarnated In MHA With A Mimic Quirk (Discontinued)
Hello everyone Moon here I just started writing this book on 6/26/2021(USA) and I started writing the Synopsis 6/27/2021(USA) so I hope you will bare with me, I will be updating chapters I've already made as well so try not to get upset for the constant updating and now for the Synopsis.
Amber and her boyfriend Michael died together in a car crash and an explosion upon their death they are given a choice to be reincarnated in MHA they chose to make the best of their second chance to be together again for them to find that there love to be seen as a force to be reckon with.
Follow Amber on her quest to find the top Five quirks for her to mimic and to find the love of her life Michael. Being the second born twin sister of Momo, reborn into a rich family she asks for very little from her parents $60 to $100 a month for allowance, and their connections to people with different types of rare quirks who owe her parents favors. To pass the UA entrance exam.
As for Michael as soon as he turned 5 he started training his body and his quirks to be strong enough to protect Amber. Even if his parents disapprove of his choice of training. His older brother Mirio Togata helps him in every way he can as a favor that his little brother asked of him so he can protect the ones he cares about. Mirio agreed to the favor on a condition that he will apply to UA when he is old enough Michael agreed to the condition readily.
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7/7/2021(USA)
AUTHOR NOTE: This is my first fanfic I'm surprised at how many people who have already added it to their library if you have any comments or questions about my fanfic please don't hesitate to ask and just so y'all know this fanfic you not have a Harem
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7/17/2021(USA)
AUTHOR NOTE II : I'm not a author who updates weekly. I will try to come out with chapters as much as possible when I has time and if I can make more to the story, plus I am looking for people who want to help me improve my writing and understanding of the MHA/BNHA series all I have to go by is the first volume of the manga and the english TV series that only comes out once a week on Toonami around midnight, where I live, so I'm in desperate need of a Co-author or three of them so I'm leaving my Discord Server for anyone who wants to put in a word of their own and/or pointers
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DISCORD SERVER:
https://discord.gg/zNggJERVQG
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆○○ - the story feels so messy. ▪︎Story Development........☆☆○○○ - why 2☆. ( the worst combination you can put in 1 ff.) - 2 reincarnated characters - system sharing - power sharing ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - the mc has a naive and stupid vibe. - i like her quirk, but why do have to give her a system?, and why do have to give her the ability share or give others a system and quirk. ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆○○ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○
I dont want to discourage you from making any future chapters but here is my opinion of the story. Its hard to follow as for each chapter its a different pov with some parts being repeated, and it seems weird for people who were reincarnated to act like little immature kids without reason as they werent even acting. For example in the second or first chapter the mc, well one of them at least just randomly began to shout mummy over and over again, and then made the decision to not copy creation which is an op quirk because she wanted to help momo learn to control it instead. How would that even work?
WQ: 2 ( it is a pain to read) Stability of Updates: 4 ( 5 chapters in 14 days, good but not worth 5 stars when there are people posting 4k words chapter every day) Story Development: 1 ( following cannon ) Character Design: 3 ( mc is naive, stupid, and doesn't think about the consequences of her actions, she was RECORDED in a CAMERA mimicking her mother's quirk and using it because of stupidity) World Background: 2
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