i think its pretty good start i cant say for sure its only been 1 chapter but if the author updates with new chapters i'll eventually change my review here, over-all its a good start in building up who the main character and much more better if theres going to be an elaborate explanation on the power of the eyes in the story.
4 years ago
4
oh_there
looking forward for story!
hope for more chapters the story is really interesting! the name death seeker sounds cool, though the main is girl but i think it would be good if boy is the main. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
i give my 5 stars i was scared for a moment in reading the story chapter 2 go!
i think its pretty good start i cant say for sure its only been 1 chapter but if the author updates with new chapters i'll eventually change my review here, over-all its a good start in building up who the main character and much more better if theres going to be an elaborate explanation on the power of the eyes in the story.
looking forward for story! hope for more chapters the story is really interesting! the name death seeker sounds cool, though the main is girl but i think it would be good if boy is the main. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] i give my 5 stars i was scared for a moment in reading the story chapter 2 go!
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